We come in pieces

 

 

We come in pieces

Fragments of broken glass

Shards of reveries

Long lost odds

And unfortunate ends

We come in pieces

 

Tucked away in ancient linen

Folded within an envelopes caress

We come in pieces

Each component trickling

Down between the webbing of our souls

Materializing and synthesizing

As integration travels its course

We come in pieces

 

All shapes sizes and colors

We come in pieces

Nuggets of incite

Bits of brilliance

We come in pieces

Forming a grand whole

A breathtaking collage

 

We come in pieces

Assembling a larger image

So you might one day see

We were always joined 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Clouded in Hopeful Illu..]

I think this is a very strong poem. It seems to catch the reader right at the beginning and leaves no room for questions. You explain what you mean and do a great job of finalizing it at the end. Great work.

"All shapes sizes and colors" --- Author's preference, but you might want to put a comma in here to help the audiance read it a bit better.

"Assembling a larger image
So you might one day see
We were always joined" ---- I believe these three lines are the best. It helps to put all the unspoken words in the poem and the main idea together and finalize the point you were making. Besides that, I love how you sort of used the idea of a puzzle; no matter what the pieces are, the are always joined together by the picture if not physically joined.

Great work.
Thank you for sharing.

[Lucinda Bogart]

Pieces making our way back to the whole...

I especially like the line "tucked away in ancient linen."

Tucked away, folded in the fabric that is us.

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This was good! I loved the words you used to express yourself. This poem said so much to the readers. Great work as always!

[Legion]

The title caught my eye. Love the play on words. This is an excellent piece(s). Love the imagery. Shattered remnants superglued together. Great work.

[Kelly D. Burris]

Wow, I just love this piece! Great job with the visuals and the break down of detail, then revealing the whole picture....
We come in pieces
Forming a grand whole
A breathtaking collage

We come in pieces
Assembling a larger image
So you might one day see
We were always joined

A fav....
Kelly