Drunkard rider of the 11th hour

Drunkard rider of the 11th hour

A Poem by The Elder Pine

 

 
Fame and fortune for your ignorance
Ancient patriot-hail thee for thee bravery!
Drunkard riding the pony of pine
Belly to the bar as the call wrings!
To arms! To Arms!
Rebel soldiers of the minute
To the hills with arms in hand!
 
Where art thow Rider of the apocalypse?
Lips pressed to a tankard
As pail ail drips from your lips
An icy chill upon the air
There you sit
Pandering to your pint
As the call sounds
Wild fires in the night
 
Lanterns ablaze-as you linger
Drunken on your wooden steed
Proclaiming your greatness
Preaching to the last patrons
Your last glory and power
I ride a gallant stallion
I am a hero! But ah how cheap
The cliché defense-a scarlet ruse  
Blushing cheek as your glory is flushed away
 
Worry not old silversmith
We’ll hollow your name
We’ll cover your truth
You sang the battle cry of the republic
You stood for glory-
Glory hallelujah!
We shan’t utter a word
As your belt drops
We see the truth of the moon
A pail and violent lie

© 2008 The Elder Pine


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As usual, another fine read. You always take me on tremendous journeys of the soul. I have to laugh a little bit at this one....

As your belt drops
We see the truth of the moon

Sounds like the riders bare a*s, and that part is funny...but

A pail and violent lie

Is somewhat sad...the pail is what holds the ale that turns the rider into the lier.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Paul would be so ashamed. You are a tremendous writer, you know that? And to think, you almost left this place. I'm glad you didn't. Would have missed the grandness of this as well as some of your other stuff. Great write. Kudos.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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The Elder Pine
The Elder Pine

Death Valley, PA



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Writing is my savior. It has become my outlet and my release, as well as my greatest passion. I dream of a career as a poet, possibly sprinkling in a few novels along the way. I operate on two levels.. more..

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