The begrudging stones of man

A rondeau for Apollonia

 

 

The begrudging stones of man overcast

Taking president as their grudges out last

Breaking the bonds of connection

A persistent erection presiding

The blast comes in turn

 

Spurned by a subjective reality

A one sided prison-duality reigning

A qualm Instigated by condescending inflection of voice

The begrudging stones of man overcast

 

As woman’s needs become the past

And tangents of pride become vast

Unchecked-a winding road without direction

As love loses protection

Stubborn a*s stands steadfast

The begrudging stones of man overcast

Reviews

[TamiViolet]

My dear...this is an exceptional piece. You vividly describe my current situation
as though you are right here with me. Love is the greatest gift but it can
quickly become a monster when indifference takes over where the promises
leave off and we are left shocked and unprotected. Thank you for this brilliant
rondeau. It will be among my favorites, and it's title will rest upon my page.
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[V. K. Harris]

I feel the rythm very well written, nice beat and strong emotion.

[Valentine]

A bit different than what I am used to..You are a gifted person with words..shouldn't this be rated for mature people? God bless..Valentine

[JC Fox]

Another excellent write, lol I'm kind of reviewed out ^_^ but you rock!

[Lucinda Bogart]

Your stuff is always so deep and pertinent. To me, the thinnest skin of the surface only appears to be about male/female relationships, but the deepest resonance is about mankind abandoning its responsibilities, especially the clever use of the word "president" instead of precedent. How apropos ! Touche'.

[Kelly D. Burris]

Very nice piece!
Kelly

[Evans O Ogbebor]

nice to see a rondeau decent job