Sacrifice

Sacrifice

A Poem by The Elder Pine
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Protagonist-igniter
Prime variable for the flood
Severely sinister apathy
Prodigy of paradigm
You shalt not sound
An out cry
 
Squeeze the life from your lungs
The belt of your black hole
As drowning cosmic possibility
The proprietors reap the benefit
Leaving no one upon the front
Replenishment a thing of memory
 
You shalt not make a sound
Says the futile lord
His infernal hand stripped
To the bone, a decaying mass
 
Sleep my lamb
A blind sleep
As a funeral ballad plays
Requiem in the air
Black shroud marks the star
Jerusalem the hole of worms today
Smites both master and laborer
 
Spare the expense
They will scorn you
For your sacrifice
Sacrifice (Remorse)
Your sacrifice (Cognizance)
 Sacrifice (Revolution)
Your sacrifice (Your price!)

© 2008 The Elder Pine


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In Response to Sacrifice

Injustice is burning
The times they are turning
Intimacy lost
So great a cost to bear

Not so says the jester
In response to the tester
My life is but mine alone

The seed she be planted
Your reign soon supplanted
And none will have nary a throne

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Wow... I read this as a prelude to Lucinda Bogart's poem and was led to a real treat. Absolutely Fabulous work. It really makes one sit up and take notice. I like your use of metaphor and independence of thought. Bravo.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

In Response to Sacrifice

Injustice is burning
The times they are turning
Intimacy lost
So great a cost to bear

Not so says the jester
In response to the tester
My life is but mine alone

The seed she be planted
Your reign soon supplanted
And none will have nary a throne

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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The Elder Pine
The Elder Pine

Death Valley, PA



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Writing is my savior. It has become my outlet and my release, as well as my greatest passion. I dream of a career as a poet, possibly sprinkling in a few novels along the way. I operate on two levels.. more..

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