PRIVATE DANCE

At night as stars dance across the skies,its vision of you in front of my eyes.You float so softly as you spin in my dream,like leaves on the water as they head down stream.Your smile lights the stage as you look at me,wherever this is I dream of,I want to be.

 

As your hair parades around so gentle in the air,you comfort me with your touch,and I know you care.Beautiful colors surround you,as you shine bright as the sun,what did I do to deserve this,what could I have done.A blessing of a dream is taking place in front of my eyes,and you being in it,comes as no surprise.

 

As you dance endlessly,with your beautiful smile,I'm glad you came to see me,if just for a while.Barefoot as the day you were born,with a sundress on,and its slightly torn.Your eyes are like crystals as far as I can tell,and the only thing missing is your intoxicating smell.You whirl around with your head falling to the side,and though I am dreaming,theres a smile a can't hide.

 

I never want to wake from this wonderful dream,and the way you look,makes me want to scream.As the music in my head,begins to fade away,I want you to take my hand,so you can always stay.And if I cant take you,and keep you with me,in my heart this private dance,will always be. 

Reviews

[Lori]

You're quite the romantic poet, and a good reminder of the reason poetry was invented long, long ago. The best poetry comes from the heart and this really sings.

[poetforlife]

Wow, I love this. Very beautiful and tender. Just like your heart!! Love you

[Brianna Brie]

Dreams like this one are truly precious. Romantic with a love so pure. Loved it.