APPRECIATED

AND WE THINK WE'RE THE TOUGH ONES

 

I feel that I am floating,when you whisper in my ear,and when we say goodbye,my eye lets out a tear.Its truly hard to know the reason,for a love like this,but I tell from the bottom of my heart,its something I would not miss.

 

Her eyes are like diamonds,they shine through and through,and I think of her and love her,with everything I do.Her heartbeat I feel as I laydown at night,and her smiling sleepy face,greets me in mornings light.I smile as I take a peek,at a body meant for a queen,and for those of you who have one,you know just what I mean.

 

She makes me feel as if I'm the last man alive,and she inspires me to be my best,so for this I strive.She understands me like no other I've ever know,and I've never seen or felt,a love like she has shown.

 

My only wish is that I make her happy as she does me,and that she knows at days end,with her is all I will be.To come to her with a warm embrace,to land a hundred I miss you kisses,all about her face.To let her know I missed her,and her funny silly ways,and not just come passing by,in some form of a daze.for her day is busy too,maybe not with the things I do,but still the same she works allday long,with the bills,kids and cleaning with that I see nothing wrong.

So late at night as we laydown to sleep,a gentle I love you,a kiss and a hug,for what I know the next day you'll go through.

Author's Note

when you think your day was hard,just sit and listen,to something I'm sure you are glad that your missing.women are not just objects..they are daugthers,mothers and wifes,and as far as I'm concerned their job blows mine out of the water any day..so heres to you homemaking lovelys that never slowdown:-)

Reviews

[Legion]

She made you write this didn't she? LOL Just kidding. Very well done. I hope you did let her read it though. Kudos.

[Windy]

You are really amazing! I only know only one other man that you remind me of, and he is my heart and soul. He doesn't write love poems as you do, though he has written me two! When I read your poems I think of him so thank you and thank you for the "here's to you homemaking ... in your authors note" it has been duly noted and extrememly appreciated. You must be a truly amazing man if your writing is anything to go by and your wife is a very lucky women as well as you are lucky to have her. Oh BTW, as for the review (LOL) It is beautifully written, full of emotion, wonderful flow and rhyme. Congratulations on another fabulous write. ;)