Life without love

A lovely couple who are in love with eachother knowing the wedding bells ringing round the corner when destiny turns out to be worst....

Beautiful day just had begun,
With chirping songs of birds,and
Carols in the church,
Wedding bells are ringing...
Prince in his suit,
Princess in her gown Makes the pictur perfect...!


That day...Our marriage
The joy is everywhere
The love is in the air
You looks more beautiful,
and so does your coffin in the right..
Unaware of the fact
The moments would change to memories very soon..!


The moments were got captured,
While destiny tooks her away,
Down through the memory lane,
She remains all the same.


If you would be here,
You would grew old,
With wrinkles on faces....
You in my mind,
You may grew old ,
But beauty is preserved..!!


Days passes on;Nothing remains the same as before,
Your presence in the past;Is now
Your absence in reality,
I preserve the moments in my mind ;
And you in my heart..!!

Author's Note

Hope you people like this poem ..I have tried my best possibility to write according to your likings and feelings...nd plz do review ..thankyou .

Reviews

[M P Ramesh]

bidya,
If nature and life intermingles and create a new one there starts poetry...you can call it by other names also if you wish so. But it commonly known as poetry........this happens to you and to me .......no doubt to Kalidasa or Keats or Goethe...lesser or higher in voltage.
But be part of it is a great achievement...but only with the same mind/intellect/soul/ can understand it..............

great attempt indeed.
carry on.........


MP Ramesh

[Bidya Palai]

Thankyou Ramesh for your review☺☺

[Karmee]

Awesome last stanza there, This whole write is amazing,
You write very well, enjoyed this write

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Beautiful and then emotional but then left me kinda content. An amazing write, Bidya Jyoti Palai.

[Bidya Palai]

Thankyou so much☺☺

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

My pleasure!

[Haseo]

it was a very good poem, now from what I understood from this poet that the teller is an old lady who lost her love to death.
its a great job indeed.
nice choice of words, couldn't done any better.

[Bidya Palai]

Thankyou!! Haseo for your review☺

[??????]

Love and feeling never leave the body in a moment. It's something we take to the day we are sent home. Wonderful expressions in all you wrote:) true the outcome is heavy but life is never an easy ride.

[Diamond]

Ohh my God, this is so moving. Amazing. But I know that life had been a bed of thorns like this for many. Like it not or not. Life goes on, till the end. Thank you for sharing this piece of emotion.

[Bidya Palai]

My plsr dear ☺☺nd thankyou for the review😊

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Life without love is like heart without beats. Your poem is really nice especially the last two lines...

[Bidya Palai]

Thankyou dear !!! For your lovely review ♡♡

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Your most welcome :)

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Thats just beautiful work Love and wedding. all these things together. You create beautiful picture of live. thanks for that.

[Bidya Palai]

Thankyou Martin for your lovely review..☺☺

[RaeAlyn]

Very nice poem. Interesting subject.

[Bidya Palai]

Thankyou RaeAlyn for your appreciation..!!☺☺

[samparks,sam]

I like your poem , Nice expression words in your poem, be continue I like

[Bidya Palai]

Thankyou so much sampark for your encouragement!!

[samparks,sam]

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