'Tal': Number Thirty-Three

'Tal': Number Thirty-Three

A Chapter by Kyari Hasutto

You were so close to convincing me, and I'm pretty sure you actually had me convinced.

You made me breakfast for my birthday at seminary--chocolate chip scones are awesome--you and your mom decorated my room...You were being nice to me.

I should've known like every other time that you'd let me down.

It was my last dance--the Mormon Prom.

It was the last dance of the night. You were just standing there.

I asked you to dance. And you turned me down. Because you didn't want to dance at all.

You have no idea how much I wanted to punch you.

Then with the grad speeches...you want to give it, at the expense of me not doing so. But the way you said it was so...biting.

My mom says the way you're treating me is abusive, and she's right. Next time it happens, I am definitely snapping at you.


© 2012 Kyari Hasutto


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I didn't realize my bro was so mean!
Now that you're all out in college and he's leaving you alone is that better?

Posted 11 Years Ago


Kyari Hasutto

11 Years Ago

Define better.
Letiel Naynarou

11 Years Ago

Like... Um, I dunno.
I feel like most of this is back and forth so if he went forth and didn'.. read more
Kyari Hasutto

11 Years Ago

I ran into him yesterday, and everything's fine. There's no longer the tension of him feeling like h.. read more

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The most significant thing about me if that I am a member of The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints (also called Mormons). If you have a problem with that...well, you shouldn't. But it is a b.. more..

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