AGONY

AGONY

A Poem by Bobbie Coelho

Such pain
Never ever
Felt anything like it
Shooting stars 
Travelling down my arm
Turning into tiny daggers
Thank God for doctors, nurses
and NHS

© 2012 Bobbie Coelho


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Having walked miles in your shoes and making Doctors richer, I can walk in your shoes. I will be praying for you. Valentine

Posted 9 Years Ago


Ach, we take out health for granted and mutter about being bored. Amen to those who are there when we do need them, as most of us will.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Hi Bobbie,
I think that you have certainly indicated the extent of the pain, leaving me wondering about the prospensity and duration of this experience. This poem just highlights my own ignorence and inexperience. The very thought of pain felt by another person can be difficult to consider in itself, yet your last two lines are just say so much about you, so humbling. Thanks so much.

Posted 12 Years Ago


wow, surefire agony here.......wonderfully painfully written.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Such pain ~ Never ever ~ Felt anything like it '

Dear Bobbie, every word you write deserves a medal, you write without self=pity yet spell out your life like a beacon in the dark. And, in this you explain briefly, subtlely, then, add a thank you. Superb brief post, but dignified and generous in spite of .. xx

Posted 12 Years Ago


Bobbie Coelho

12 Years Ago

Thank you, Emma but it is horrendous

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Bobbie Coelho
Bobbie Coelho

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I am 59, retired, married, have Parkinsons. In addition have written a book called Finding the Light. I have published a second anthology of poetry this year entitled Reflecting the Light more..

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