Who I am

Here as I sit, the days go by

Not one cloud fills the sky

I sit in my cell with a bed and chair

I look out the window with a cold hard stare

Watching as cars go by

Wondering why I never tried

I struggle and push till i'm put in the car

As I sit behind these rusty old bars

I think about the choice I've made

Knowing consequences have to be paid

I sit knowing the poem gets longer

Knowing that after I will be stronger

Trying to find people to blame

Knowing the offender is still the same

Acting like someone I will never be

Knowing that the offender is me.

Reviews

[Black Jess]

Woaw , I really like your poem ! Short , simple and yet so beautiful . I like some sentences here like '' Trying to find people to blame '' ans '' Acting like someone I will never be '' . Goob job .

[Kat24]

this is a sad poem. but it was really good.

[Dream Weaver]

I'm a big fan of rhyme, I must say I enjoyed this
very much. It all fit together perfectly and so
melancholic...

[Becky Clancy]

Wow, I can feel some sort of sadness in here, I really enjoyed this poem very much, keep up the good work ^_^b