A day never to be forgotten

My first car accident. Most of you have probably already been there.

Help.... he isn't breathing

Get in the vehicle

It'll be okay when we get to the hospital

90mph on the way

Look back.... sharp corner.

Patch of ice.... Swerve

Oh s**t!

Hit the breaks hit the breaks!!!!

No!

7 total rolls

Landed on the side of the vehicle

Open my eyes

Blood everywhere

Screams in the background

Everything goes black and feels like its playing in slow motion

Wake up in the ambulance stare out the window

At the vehicle and the person that tried helping me

But almost cost me my life.

"Everything is going to be fine."

Reviews

[Yellow Butterfly]

I can feel the panic
I can feel the adrenalin rush
I can feel the impact
I can hear the screams
I can sense the feeling of being all alone for that instant...

"Everything is going to be fine"

Brilliantly executed....

[tk]

hmmmm... i can feel the action and tragedy in every line... i like how you described that incident, detail by detail. greatly penned.. :)
*A.A.*

[sarah]

Wow this is....just wow I literally and speechless. This is...all I can say is wow