It is war!!!

It is war!!!

A Poem by Brook Hughes

That is it!

I'm done with this

You have pushed me

Pushed my buttons so, so far

You're gonna get it

I've had it up to here....

With all of your nonsense

Judge me...

I'll judge you back

Judge my friends...

You'll wish you hadn't

Judge my family...

You're gonna regret it!

You asked for it.

IT IS WAR!!!

© 2011 Brook Hughes


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You punctuated only half of the piece! Other than that I like the feel to it, but I also get an inkling that it would be better if it was longer and less repetative. Judging by your age though this is a very decent poem. Well Done.

Posted 13 Years Ago


What were you trying to achieve in this poem? What was the message you were trying to communicate?

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Okay!

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Brook Hughes
Brook Hughes

Viroqua, WI



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Hi:) So... my name is Brook Hughes. I have 2 middle names Ashley and Ann. I live in good old Wisconsin. My social security number is 33562. LMFAO!!!!! jk jk. Anyways i love animals.... I would like t.. more..

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