It is war!!!

It is war!!!

A Poem by Brook Hughes

That is it!

I'm done with this

You have pushed me

Pushed my buttons so, so far

You're gonna get it

I've had it up to here....

With all of your nonsense

Judge me...

I'll judge you back

Judge my friends...

You'll wish you hadn't

Judge my family...

You're gonna regret it!

You asked for it.

IT IS WAR!!!

© 2011 Brook Hughes


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Definitely unique, but head-on and everyone can relate!
I got a kick out of reading this for sure!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Nice outspoken words, the feeling, the way it trails but, connect. First time reading your poems I think and I would like to say I liked this; definitely a favorite as you've spoken the words I wish so desperately to speak to certain people. So well done and can't wait to read more of your writings soon.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like this! I smiled when i was reading it since this has real personality to it!



Posted 12 Years Ago


very nicely done..

Posted 12 Years Ago


Hmmmm, well if you wanted to bring forth a rant, then you succeeded.. A rather good one at that.. Glad I'm not the one you are mad at!!! :)

Mags xx

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like it :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


Sometimes you just need to let things go and treat that person with respect i know its hard trust me I have trouble doing that and you also need to think whats going on with them but i don't know the situation but really great writing

Posted 12 Years Ago


Not really sure why you are on the War Path .. Was it over someone here ? .. Or someone close to home .. It is ok to rant . .. Hope all turns out for the better ..

J. x

Posted 12 Years Ago


interesting

Posted 13 Years Ago


hi,
this is very good. Kat24

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Brook Hughes
Brook Hughes

Viroqua, WI



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Hi:) So... my name is Brook Hughes. I have 2 middle names Ashley and Ann. I live in good old Wisconsin. My social security number is 33562. LMFAO!!!!! jk jk. Anyways i love animals.... I would like t.. more..

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