Cry Cry Cry

Cry, cry, cry

Let it out

I know it hurts

I know what you are going through

I can help

I can stop the hurt

I just can't stop mine

I can fix your broken heart

Just follow me

I will help you

Just let it out

Cry on my shoulder

I will save you

Cry, cry, cry

Reviews

[sarah]

This is touching being there for someone going though something difficult. This is a moving piece

[Sweets]

It's kinda easy to help people out of depression, but really hard to help ourselves out...we always need that special someone :)
Wonderful work here, and this has a good flow :)

[*~DreamDeamon~*]

i dont see the flow.
its kinda like you didnt have to much thought put into it.
I hate giving bad reviews but i also think nthat the words do have meaning and do probably make sesne to you just not some of the other people. good try. kepp writing...

[Zackery Alan Daley]

This is not really that well written...please do not take offense. Here is your first lesson: Good poetry can be read aloud, and should generate a response from the reader as well as an audience. The rhyming scheme in this poem is choppy and doesn't even flow when you read it inside your mind.