Broken hearts

Fix this broken heart... of mine

Make it stop bleeding

You broke it

You stomped all over it...

And buried it in the ground.

 

Fix this broken heart... oh please

Stop this pain

You left it

You left me...

And broke my heart.

 

Fix this broken heart... my heart

You cheated on me

It has turned against me

It has stopped beating!

Reviews

[sarah]

This is so sad! I really felt the pain in this great great work!

[Sweets]

I loved the last stanza!!!
especially the last line :)
there is always someone who hurts us...yeah...but I think they should also help us too :/
Great work, this was really sad =/

[Zackery Alan Daley]

I loved the first stanza, but the last one...how do you cheat on some one when you are fourteen? I am definitely not saying a young person cannot write great love poetry. However, when you truly fall in love is when this spirit comes out, and there are like 4 stages where you think, but really just are not in love.