Time to move on

Families are close

This I know for a fact

It's hard when you have to let them go

You try so hard to move on...

But you just can't

When a loved one die

They go to their happy place

Be happy knowing that now they are happy

You should move on with your life

Just like parents tell you to do.

Well, it's hard to move on!

When you know for a fact...

You will never see them again...

Never hear them laugh,

See their beautiful smile.

Never hear their voice again.

Their gone

You'll never see them again

It's time to move on.

 

Reviews

[Jazique]

Its time to move on and they want you to live your life because hey just because they've gone to the party in the sky no time sadness but only celebration. Even I have lost a lot but still smile for sunshine knowing their in my heart. So all I say in wonderful.

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

It was hard for me when my grandpa died. I was in shock but I kept thinking the things you said in your poem. It is so hard to move on, but the thing that keeps me going is that when I pass on, I will see him again. Nice job!

[RJM]

Losing a loved one is the worst feeling ever..but what can we do but move on? Why linger on the pain when we know that at least do suffer no more? Why be melancholic when we know that when our time comes we will see them again? Just remember that no matter what they still love you and that their love will remain in you forever. They may have left this world but that does not mean that they are gone forever for they will always live in your heart and mind.

[sarah]

This is sort of bittersweet wonderful write really captures truth great work!

[HopelesslyDevoted]

aw this is so sad...

[Kat24]

hi,
this is very interesting. kat24