Where's my Romeo

Where's my Romeo

A Poem by Brook Hughes

Where is he

Where is my Romeo

Where can he be

I need him

I need him to protect me...

To hold me

Are you out there?

If you are please tell me.

Please come and save me

 

© 2010 Brook Hughes


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Short but sweet. You've packed a lot of emotion into just a few words.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nice feel the same way and wonder where he is. so cute .

Posted 13 Years Ago


Awesome! I wonder where my Romeo is too, but it's going to be hard to find him for me!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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you keep searching for romeo when romeo is but a dream of all women. He is but a fantasy of how a man should be. So do not wait for Romeo to hold you or to protect you. Stand up for yourself and show the world that you are a girl who would fight back and is not dependent on any man!

Posted 13 Years Ago


The search is always uncertain.
But we will never quit searching
until we have found that Romeo
or Juliet...Short but poignant!

Posted 13 Years Ago


this is really good for being so short... its a question girls are asking and have been asking for certuries... what scares me is that not everyone has a romeo... i just hope i do...

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nice. I'm glad you are the one calling out for him instead of someone else. Maybe he's out there, but just doesn't hear you. In this, I picture Juliet out on her balcony asking herself these questions. As if she's talking to herself. She's wishing for him to come back, praying, begging even. But she knows it'll be quite sometime before he shows up again, but in the end, he'll be sure to return someday.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is sweet and I'm suprised theres only 2 reviews. This is a great write:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


hi,
this is really good. kat24

Posted 13 Years Ago


wonderful...

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Brook Hughes
Brook Hughes

Viroqua, WI



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Hi:) So... my name is Brook Hughes. I have 2 middle names Ashley and Ann. I live in good old Wisconsin. My social security number is 33562. LMFAO!!!!! jk jk. Anyways i love animals.... I would like t.. more..

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