Just tell me

Just tell me

A Poem by Brook Hughes

You are gone

What am I suppose to do?

I am so lost

Am I suppose to cower

And hide in the dark

Away from everyone

Facing my fears

And my worst nightmare

Am I to hide in a corner?

Waiting for someone to realize...

That I need help

I'm hurting

And dying inside

Without you, I'm nothing

Tell me, what am I suppose to do?

Just tell me!

© 2010 Brook Hughes


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I really like how this one flows along and how simple yet effective the wording is.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Great work...It puts out all of those questions people ask in heartbreak...and also points out that we dont always get answers.

Keep writing :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


When its time to start over its hard to know what to do so all I can say is well done potraying what to do.

Posted 13 Years Ago


So sad yet strong and hopeful. Great work on putting all the emotions in there!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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RJM
Heart broken much my friend. You do not need someone else to be happy, remember that all it takes to be happy is to be satisfied. Also learn to love yourself before giving all your love to someone else who might leave you.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Sometimes the question remains unanswered, this is heart wrenching
xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


seriously... sometimes i wish things were so simple to the point where the answers were just right there to see

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Brook Hughes
Brook Hughes

Viroqua, WI



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Hi:) So... my name is Brook Hughes. I have 2 middle names Ashley and Ann. I live in good old Wisconsin. My social security number is 33562. LMFAO!!!!! jk jk. Anyways i love animals.... I would like t.. more..

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