Mommy's no longer here

I have grown lonesome and depressed

Now that your gone...

I have nobody on my side

Comforting me telling me

Everything is going to be okay

Now that your gone...

I have nobody telling me

Mommy's here everything is going to be fine.

Mommy will never leave you Mommy loves you

Mommy's gone.

Author's Note

I really hope that there is someone out there that understands what this is about.

Reviews

[4 A.M PJ]

very deep,well written

[Ruth]

Love, this is so moving!
The figure of Mommy gone, either through loss or leaving, is heart wrenching, I know all to well the feeling of loss!
xx

[Sweets]

This is terribly sad...
People forget by time, and only the memories stay...
I hope you feel better soon
-Sweets

[Jazique]

Awe that is so sad I sometimes try avoid what the future may hold for loved one and esp my mom knowing that she can't be here forever but, excellente job.

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

So sorry. I just lost my grandpa and he meant so much to me. I hope you recover soon and lovely poem!

[Cliff Rhodes]

Nice to read even if it is a little depressing and I hope you will continue to express yourself in this beautiful medium.

Don't really understand, but I can feel that the painful energy is being released into an arena of healing that will reflect back spiritually comforting feelings to you. We all have feelings that are difficult to cope with. There is only one reliable place to go with really heavey burdens and that is to Jesus.

Mathew 11:28
Come unto me, all ye that labour and are heavy laden, and I will give you rest.

[Olive Belikov]

Sooo incredibly sad. In a way, I know exactly what it means even though I haven't lost my mom.
Great job

[the-One-with-the-Darkne..]

Wow. Increidble. Im so sorry.

[sarah]

awwwwwwww this is soooooooooo sad!

[HopelesslyDevoted]

i totally understand this. this is a fantastic poem, i can feel the genuine love for your mother in this writing! very good!