Why?

I know I wasn't there for you

When I should have been.

When I was there

All I could see on your face

Was, where were you..

When I needed you the most?

Why didn't you come back?

You meant the world to me

And now that your gone..

All I can do is cry

And hide something deep down..

Inside that hurts.

I can't take it anymore

The Pain, the suffering

That you put me through

It's too much to handle!

Reviews

[4 A.M PJ]

expressed very well,great job

[megaluv92]

Wow, fantastic piece! In lines 4 and 9, your should be you're

[....]

such a sad write but well expressed.

[Jazique]

Negativity is present but so is a talent. good job.

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

Depressing, but really nice!

[Olive Belikov]

Really sad but really good. Love it!
( you should read my story Fairy Tale, even though it us kinda long. )

[HopelesslyDevoted]

:( this is so sad, it totally made me want to cry as well. i think this one (like many of your other poems) is something people can relate to very well.

[Kaitlyn]

This... I can relate to... i can't tell you how much i enjoyed reading this. Good Job!

[Dream Weaver]

Pain and suffering is all a part of life,
we all go through it at one time or
another. It's how you respond and
bounce back from all the pain and
suffering that will truly define your
character, one day at a time...

[sarah]

man can I relate to this poem you have no idea.