The Last Goodnight

Shut down every window and close every door,

Don’t allow anyone to pass across this Boulevard.

Close your eyes now and hear their silent screams,

Coming from the main street, from the graveyard.




Shed every other color now and wear only black,

Let just mourn for the loss, and grieve for his death.

Let me remember his last memory, his last smile,

The things he said to me before his last breath.




In just a moment, he has gone to an unknown space,

There it goes- his frozen coffin out of the sight.

Let me say something to him, may be even a goodbye,

Let me wish to him with my cold words the last goodnight.


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Author's Note

No matter where I'll go and what I'll do in my life, but I will always remember you. You will always be more than a memory for me.

Reviews

[ellspeth]

oh my gosh . . . that is like amazing.

[katyj]

This is sad really, but yet beuatifully written.

[Kim]

Full of deep powerful feelings,
Your emotioins are so well expressed.

[prodicallife]

good one bhavya it was full of deep thoughts to take any emotion with these words. appriciation for a small wish in words but the biggest in emotions..and we always miss the last glance of that face we alwayz spent our days with. tuffest thing to do is watch the grave shifting down in the silence..good writting
PRODICAL

[Akshat♥]

We always miss our close ones..We have to live without them..
but they will always live in our hearts forever:(
Awesome write..sad one!!
Keep Writing:(

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Wow so breath taking, so heart gripping.
very nicely written.

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

This was beautifully written. Heartfelt and deep. Great write!