I just imagined you

There you are now, finally walking towards me,

Creating glitters in my eyes, and a smile on my face.

I hugged you tightly to acknowledge your presence,

To never let you go, to cherish your sweetest grace.




Your fingertips gently touched my drenched skin,

And with this touch, you captivated every part of me.

I cried with joy, for it was like my dream coming true,

When you took my hand and started to dance with me.




Suddenly a cold wind came and sucked all the sanity in me.

I opened my eyes with lack of desire into this hard reality.

Your touch, your voice, your smell was nothing but my imagination.

To keep myself alive, sometimes I have to live with this deception.



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Reviews

[beyondpen]

Thats a great write! I loved the way the last stanza portrays the reluctance to let go of the sweet imagination...

[Cheryl]

So true

[Bakor War]

Reminds me of La Belle Dame Sans Merci in a way.

[Phantom Heart]

I love it. I love how the last four lines turn the poem. I appreciate writing like this. Thank you for sharing.

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Thank you, means a lot :)

[the_stoic]

simple words, clear expressions !

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Thank you :)

[Sirius King]

great write!

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Thank you :)

[Akshita]

VERY EXPRESSIVE POEM!!! I LIKE IT...!!!

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Thanks! :)

[alegria]

lovely piece of write...

[Mia]

Wow! It is such a beautiful poem, I just want to read it and reread and read it some more! Incredible!

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Aw! Thank you :)

[priyanka pant]

true and amazingly crafted!