I just imagined you

There you are now, finally walking towards me,

Creating glitters in my eyes, and a smile on my face.

I hugged you tightly to acknowledge your presence,

To never let you go, to cherish your sweetest grace.




Your fingertips gently touched my drenched skin,

And with this touch, you captivated every part of me.

I cried with joy, for it was like my dream coming true,

When you took my hand and started to dance with me.




Suddenly a cold wind came and sucked all the sanity in me.

I opened my eyes with lack of desire into this hard reality.

Your touch, your voice, your smell was nothing but my imagination.

To keep myself alive, sometimes I have to live with this deception.



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Reviews

[m3lody mae]

So deep and emotional and so well penned.

[Mitali Shah]

Well penned Bhavya. God bless :)

[Brianna Brie]

This one is so heartbreaking to read. It brings back a flood of emotion that lays beneath the surface. Yes, the title is eye catching. Excellent!! 💔

[KittyVenus]

amazing!!!! this is such a good piece of poetry... very well written! XD

[Praveeta]

Isn't imagination wonderful? Well written piece.

[Kwiksie Ifediora]

Oh this is so very sad and moving. The pain which accompanies reality's rude awakening sometimes gets overwhelming and almost unbearable.

This was very well written by the way, the joy at the start made the pathetic drop into utter loneliness even more bruising. Your diction and structure are just great.
Thanks so very much for sharing. :)

[Anusha Prabhu]

You have beautifully described the feeling one has to face when he wishes for something he would probably never have. Loved the depth. hats off.. ;)

[Shelina Shariff-Zia]

This just sums up the sadness one feels when a lover dies. It was so moving. The contrast of the joy and happiness of the first two verses with the desolation of the last verse is perfect.

[ganga ramesh]

i loved it so much....very involving and very attractive...your lines are magnetic....love it:)

[Krithika Raghavan]

I just love your title and the way you've described;-)