My Dead Heart

 

 †The Evanescent screams†

 

 

 

† My Dead Heart   †

 

 

I soundlessly stand at an abandoned corner,

 

Watching my heart being so perfectly crushed by you.

 

A heart which was once so red by your love,

 

Now turning blue like a cold crystal of ice.

 

 

 

If this is what it feels like being in love,

 

Then I do not want to fall in love again.

 

You have created a hole in my heart,

 

Which would be impossible for me to mend.

 

 

 

 

I’m sure you would be happier if I will leave,

 

My presence does no longer matters to you.

 

I often think that your wish is for me to die,

 

And that is when I realize than I’m already dead.

 

Reviews

[Elanra]

absolutely heart-wrenching! I agree with Midnight Dreams... I only felt odd at two places...one is a grammer mistake and mentioned already and the other is the last line of the second stanza... it doesnt rhyme with the stanza itself but rhymes with the last line of the third stanza...

its one more time beautiful tho... very beautiful.

[Midnight Dreams]

Heartwrenching!!!!!! I often think that your wish is for me to die..........How could someone be so cruel?

[Vertu Rose]

Beautiful.