My second letter to you...

 

 

 

 

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 My Second Letter To You…

 

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My Immortal,

 

It is not very often in this world when we find that person who loves us truly, madly and deeply…the person whom we also loves the most and could give everything out of this world to them. The kind of love which we both had was something more than a miracle.

It was more than a dream which finally turned into realism. But like every other dream, ours also came to an end and I finally opened my eyes into this unforgiving reality.

 

I remember it was on this very day, when I went to your home to visit you. I searched for you everywhere and then when I went upstairs I found you sitting at a corner in your bathroom and how your blood was flowing out from your mouth because of your sickness. You looked at me and said these three words which I still remember – “Call the ambulance”.
That was the last memory of yours at that place since after that day you never came back to your home again from the hospital.

 

I made a promise to you that I will never ever cry for you, I promised you that I will try to forget you and will also try to love someone else again. But I’m really sorry my love, I’m not at all strong enough to keep my promise alive even in your absence.
Don’t get me wrong…But there have been times when I cry for nights and then finally go to sleep by dreaming about no one else but you.

I’m convinced by the fact now that I can not love anyone else again. You were my first and last love and I will keep on loving you forever...

 

I always knew that time could never ever change the love in my heart for you. But I never thought that with time it will grow even deeper with everything I do.

I never thought that I will miss you so much in your absence. People say that we only realize the importance of our loved ones only after when they are gone…But it is not like that, we always know their importance… It is just that we love them so much that we could never ever thought that one day even they can leave out of our life.

Your death was something which made me a person whom I thought I could never be. I loved you so much that your absence left me with nothing except silence.

I never thought that someday you will just leave from my life forever. Even today when I wake up I sometimes think of receiving your call or visiting your place.

You have left so many things behind you that will always remain incomplete without you and surely I’m one of them…

 

This letter is not to make you realize that I’m not happy without you. But this letter is to pay my apology to you for breaking your promises of moving on with my life without you…Yet, I’m moving on but the destination of my life is still you…

Each and every day brings me closer to you. Since, I’m more than certain that I will one day meet you in my afterlife and we will be together after that till forever.

Meanwhile, I guess I will just live and will keep on facing all the hardships which are coming in the path of my life…As they all are worth the pain when the destination leads to you.

 

I will always love you…

 

Yours,

 

B

 

 

Reviews

[Elanra]

... Maybe it wasnt such a good idea reading this right after the one before cus i wont be able to see the screen for some time so i can read the third one.. I am crying sooo much i am simply ugly now...

oh.. god..

everything about your writing has already been said with these many beautiful reviews coming from the actually talented people... i have nothing else to add to their comments on your perfection as an "artist"...
i simply bow you Bhavya... not just as a congratz on ur work but as a sign of respect... i respect you for two reasons: one, for being such an outstanding author and poet,
and two, for being such a glorious reflection of true love which i always believed in... true love never dies.
it never ends. it never fades. nothing can be its cure, cus its not an illness. even the pain felt from it is a blessing for it is a connection with that "one"...
i feel like bowing is not enough before you, i feel like i should kneel before you for your strength, for your commitment and surely for your majestic way of writing...
Excellent Piece Bhavya... i wont call this a "work" cus it isnt... it is a memory in written format...

[..]

wow ever so powerful this moved me so deep. Terrific writer you are

[Shamrock]

Your letters are beautiful. How come you call this person Immortal, he or she has died? Is this a nickname for this person being eternally loved?

[a_mystery]

You are such a wonderful writer.. your poured your heart on the writing.. only one thing to say.. your love is eternal.. may you find peace..

[MagiCrystal]

I am convinced that your love is holding your heart in Heaven.. My God loves you..
these lines.. are to my a prayer and a treasure..
I made a promise to you that I will never ever cry for you, I promised you that I will try to forget you and will also try to love someone else again. But I’m really sorry my love, I’m not at all strong enough to keep my promise alive even in your absence.
Don’t get me wrong…But there have been times when I cry for nights and then finally go to sleep by dreaming about no one else but you.

I’m convinced by the fact now that I can not love anyone else again. You were my first and last love and I will keep on loving you forever...
I am crying because I feel your pain and your lost..also because I lost a son and still until today...I feel exactly like you.. lost in words..
I love your soul and your heart for who you are and because I know God give you the miracle to love and find love... and now. you can go on.. smiling and knowing that some day.. You will be complete.. the way you where when you find this love that you never lost.. simply.. is awaiting for you in eternity...I will continue to cry .. for you and for this lovely and amazing letters.. Love you.

[E. A. Fielder]

My immortal (original version): "I'd love to walk away and pull myself out of the rain but I can't can't leave without you. I'd love to live without the constant fear and endless doubt but I can't live without you." totally sums up this chapter in my mind. Very well done!

[Amanda]

a beautiful continuation of the first letter...though you mourn the loss of your love, you still have hope in some day being reunited. the love is not lost, but lives on in your heart.

well done, my dear Bhavya

Amanda

[LlamaLord]

Wow.. I can't remember the last time I cried when reading something. Believe me when I say this is a rare occasion. But about this piece of writing... Completely heart-felt and entirely beautiful. You described everything so well. This piece left me sad, but with a spark of hope. At the end of every story, somewhere, there is hope. I know you will always carry that spark with you as you have carried it this far. Very well done! Thanks for the read!

-Austin

[Kevin Andros]

Man, You are surely make me cry for the zillionth time. No I am not lying. You are a true artist (I did not say writer), and the way you paint the picture of your difficult times that you go through every second in your life makes me want to cut myself and bleed to death, hoping that I will at least experience a millionth fraction of your pain. I will always salute you my friend, and I feel honored that I could call you my friend.

Best,

~KA~

[Vaishali..^_^]

oh my god...you write so well ....

"It is not very often in this world when we find that person who loves us truly, madly and deeply�the person whom we also loves the most and could give everything out of this world to them. "
yeah..!! really it's very hard to find someone like that.....but when we are with them...it's very hard to let them go...:)


great work...:) thanks for sharing...^_^