My first letter to you...

 

 My First Letter To You…

 

 

 

 

 

My Immortal,

 

Much before even we met, I knew you existed in a different world. Somewhere unseen you used to visit my dreams at every night. Soon you came into my life and I realized that you were the one, the only one for me. You entered in my life and changed every part of it. When we fall in love everyone was surprised to witness the union of two different souls into one. They were finding it hard to believe that two so incomplete and dissimilar humans could ever unite in such a way that the existence of one could make the other person complete in every sense as if the creator himself wanted them to be together for always. But they were wrong; the creator wanted us to be together but not for always. He had some different plans for us than we had for ourselves. We both were so in love with each other that everything was appearing like a dream and we were finding it hard to open our eyes again. But just like any other dream, ours also soon came to an end and became a nightmare of the past…

 

It’s been two years now from your death and you still visit my dreams in that same way as you used to visit before. I did a lot of different things in these past two years, I changed the direction of my life, I made a lot of friends, I went to every place to run away from our memories and I tried to do everything that was possible to forget you. But I soon realized that the more I try to forget you, the more I fall in love with you. People say that we can fall in love only once but they are wrong …because every time whenever I listen to your voice or see your photograph, I fall in love with you over and over again…

 

 My life was like a song lyric searching for its music. When you entered in my life you gave it a perfect symphony and made the world to dance upon the melody of our love. But as soon as you left me, the lyrics were changed and the symphony of your absence became its true music for the world to cry upon…

 

This is the first letter which I’m writing to you after the day when you left me from this physical world. But surely, this isn’t the last one. It is not the end of our journey but the beginning of a new one. You are my eternal, my immortal and will always continue living in this world through me, with me and for me. My every heartbeat is your voice and this entire world is the reflection of your sight into mine…

 

This letter is not to say goodbye to you my love but to thank you for coming in my life. To thank you for loving me without any expectations, to thank you for receiving my love and holding it inside of your heart till your last breath, and most importantly I thank you for educating me what love is all about…

 

I love you…

 

Yours,

B.

Author's Note

I wrote this in less than even 10 minutes...may be because I was not even required to think anything while writing this....It came right from the heart :)

Reviews

[LlamaLord]

This is such a powerful piece of writing. It teaches several lessons about love and also, several lessons about losing it.
"People say that we can fall in love only once but they are wrong �because every time whenever I listen to your voice or see your photograph, I fall in love with you over and over again�"
Those lines are so beautiful because they are SO TRUE! You placed a fact into your own example for your audience. It takes true compassion and strength to write from the heart, and i see that in every line. Lovely right, hope to read more soon.

-Austin

[deeps]

This is so powerful and so wonderfully written.
I have always loved you writes.
You always have so much to say in them

[Kevin Andros]

Wah bhai.... Great job... it is becoming more and more impossible to review your works in words, simply because the english language has too few words to explain and enaculate the beauty and depths of your pieces. All I can say is that you are doing a fantastic job and say Keep up!~!


~KA~

[Innocent]

You know when I finished reading this writing I sat in front of my computer screen wondering what should I write about it. You absolutely left no words for me to write.
This is not just a story or any other writing, but this is a letter to your soul and believe me what a heart breaking letter it is.
I don't know from where do you come up with these different ways to convey your emotions that even though everytime you write about the same subject but it feels like so different in every single writing of yours. I really don't know how do you do that but I salute you for that now my dear friend.
"People say that we can fall in love only once but they are wrong �because every time whenever I listen to your voice or see your photograph, I fall in love with you over and over again�"
Though I cried while reading the entire write but I busted into tears when I read these lines.
This was one of the most beautiful writings I have ever read Bhavya. Thank you for writing it.

[Karl]

I can not believe that you have written this in 10 minutes. It will take more than an hour for me to write anything like that and even though after that I'm sure I won't come out with anything better than this.
You are a master of writing writings like this.

[Golden]

This was so heart breaking!
Awesome dude, simply awesome.

[Blue Rose]

This was a wonderful writing my friend here. I'm so much in love with your work right now. Just keep writing, you are going to be a star.

[!!..Love..!!]

Oh my god! This had tears in my eyes Bhavya.
A lot of people love in this world but very few have that passion inside of their hearts which you possesses.
You are a great human being and a brilliant writer. I want to hug you now after reading this letter since I really don't know what should I write.

[Together]

This was so heart breaking and so so sad.
How can you write so beautifully? I would die to have this much of talent.

[Roxy]

I salute your writing skills for writing such a beautiful letter to your love and that too within such a short span of time. The more I read you, the more I fall in love with your writings.
She was a good friend of mine too and I'm sure she must be very proud of you right now.
Smile for her, since she is still there with you.
As you always say , she is your "Immortal" !

[Blackbeats]

This is awesome!
I cried my eyes out after reading it.