The Last Song I'm Wasting On You...

Inspired by a song :)

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THE LAST SONG I’M WASTING ON YOU….

 

 

 

 

This is not the first song which I’m writing for you,

Heartless everyday yet I write something on you,

Endlessly I have realized that now I can’t forget you.

 

 Lexicon now can’t give enough words to me,

Any sunrise now can’t ignite that passion in me.

Sorrow surrounds me from every side,

This light now seems to turn into a dark night.

 

Stop coming into my thoughts,

Oh! I don’t need you anymore.

Now I have started to move on with life,

Go away, I don’t cry for you anymore.

 

 I’m watching the passage of your every memory,

Most of them now seem like some old sad story.

 

Writing was my passion, but you made it my life,

As about you I can write throughout my life.

Still I swear I’ll never write anything more on you,

This pain which you gave me is now counting on you.

 I will find something else to waste my words,

No more I will write just to feel good enough.

Gnarled I will feel to write again those words.

 

Oh! This is the last song I’m wasting on you,

No, now you can’t hide as this one is just for you.

 

Your presence no more surrounds me,

Only I feel myself and this world without you.

Unwillingly I promise I will never waste my words on you…

 

 

 

Author's Note

Just yesterday only I was practicing with my band and just for a break we started to sing the song "The Last Song I'm wasting On You" by Evanescence. Since we all are their huge fans and I was so much into that mood that this piece came into my mind.
It is entirely inspired by the song "The last song I'm wasting on you" by Evanescence :)

Reviews

[JENY]

Wow….
Fantastic….
A sincere translation…
Of a dilemma….into a poem…
Very perfect in that sense….
Very touching too…
You attempt to come to terms with simultaneous feelings of attraction and repulsion…towards your object of love…

[Golden]

Wow man! I'm just out of my words. It is so awesome!!!

[Dani California]

Nice job Bhavya :) I'm an Evanescense fan myself, and am familiar with the song you speak of. I particularly enjoyed reading these lines from you:

Oh! I don't need you anymore.
Now I have started to move on with life,
Go away, I don't cry for you anymore.

I'm watching the passage of your every memory,
Most of them now seem like some old sad story.


Love it.

It would be great if you and your band could put this to music, record it and let us all hear it! I would be interested to hear how this sounds recorded.

[Rain]

Well, you did an excellent job. It sounds like you are trying so hard to break free from a memory. It was both sad and beautiful. Rain..

[Cam]

Wow, just so many great lines in this.
Stop coming into my thoughts,
Oh! I don't need you anymore.
Now I have started to move on with life,
Go away, I don't cry for you anymore.

Lovely. It starts the tear-jerking scene for me.

[Ruby Moon]

this is a song and not a declaration that you wont write anymore (at least about her)...
right?
^-^;
right?
it would be a waste not to see your work anymore

:)
but i think that you would write
^-^
a lovely but sad piece... just the style you are best with
^-^
looking forward to some more of your writings

[Brianna Brie]

Stop coming into my thoughts,
Oh! I don't need you anymore.
Now I have started to move on with life,
Go away, I don't cry for you anymore.

I will find something else to waste my words,

So many great words in this poem. I was so into it that it wasn't till the end that I realized it is a acrostic. COOL.

[!!..Love..!!]

Wow! This is incredible.
The one reason why I love your writings so much is that they all have so much of soul in them and while reading them I always find myself so close with you as if I could sense your feelings.
So, are you serious?
Will you not write again for her, huh!!!

[Areya Valena]

I am also a huge fan. :) I love the way you spelled it out, and it flowed well, too. It wasn't chopped or anything, and thats good. (BTW, this is my favorite song by Evanescence *Smile*

Great Work

[poetic soul]

this is jus SUPERB~~

its the second poem this week i m reading of this type as in, the first letter of every line when read together, makes sense, and here, its the title of yo poem... its beautifully written.... Kudos mate!! really loved the read... :) your poem "another poem i m wasting on you" is in my fav. already, this is also going there...

Regards,
Poetic Soul