The Last Song I'm Wasting On You...

Inspired by a song :)

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THE LAST SONG I’M WASTING ON YOU….

 

 

 

 

This is not the first song which I’m writing for you,

Heartless everyday yet I write something on you,

Endlessly I have realized that now I can’t forget you.

 

 Lexicon now can’t give enough words to me,

Any sunrise now can’t ignite that passion in me.

Sorrow surrounds me from every side,

This light now seems to turn into a dark night.

 

Stop coming into my thoughts,

Oh! I don’t need you anymore.

Now I have started to move on with life,

Go away, I don’t cry for you anymore.

 

 I’m watching the passage of your every memory,

Most of them now seem like some old sad story.

 

Writing was my passion, but you made it my life,

As about you I can write throughout my life.

Still I swear I’ll never write anything more on you,

This pain which you gave me is now counting on you.

 I will find something else to waste my words,

No more I will write just to feel good enough.

Gnarled I will feel to write again those words.

 

Oh! This is the last song I’m wasting on you,

No, now you can’t hide as this one is just for you.

 

Your presence no more surrounds me,

Only I feel myself and this world without you.

Unwillingly I promise I will never waste my words on you…

 

 

 

Author's Note

Just yesterday only I was practicing with my band and just for a break we started to sing the song "The Last Song I'm wasting On You" by Evanescence. Since we all are their huge fans and I was so much into that mood that this piece came into my mind.
It is entirely inspired by the song "The last song I'm wasting on you" by Evanescence :)

Reviews

[JENY]

Wow….
Fantastic….
A sincere translation…
Of a dilemma….into a poem…
Very perfect in that sense….
Very touching too…
You attempt to come to terms with simultaneous feelings of attraction and repulsion…towards your object of love…

[Kayla]

This is amazing!! Every detail you include is very good!! My favorite thing is how the first letter of every phrase spelled out THE LAST SONG I'M WASTING ON YOU!! This poem was just phenomenal!! And the fact that is based off of a song is just cool!!

[shareeg]

I choose to review this one because I love song lyrics and poetry and this seems like a combination. I loved the part in the center because I could relate............. Stop coming into my thoughts,

Oh! I don't need you anymore.

Now I have started to move on with life,

Go away, I don't cry for you anymore.

I loved that because I can directly relate to this, This was a very nice poem and a smooth read. I like this site because the writers seem really good so far, amazing poem.

[E. A. Fielder]

I love evanescence and I think its so cool how you were inspired by that song as it is one of my favorites to play on piano!

[deeps]

Wow! Now this is what I call one amazing here.
Wow! so expressive. You are so gifted and poetic.
I really admire your talent.

[The Flawed]

Great

[talulu love]

wow i luv it good job ur good

[IPMONER]

cunning

[Jessica M.]

I like the irony in "I will never waste my words on you"
yet the entire poem is about the "you"
or about forgetting about the you
yet that line really seems to portray a sense of endearment for the subject in the poem.
Beautiful write.

[R Merritt]

Wow really nice read. I know some people think it's not really helpful in a review to just recite our favorite lines from the poem, but I'm gonna do it anyway cause a few lines really stood out to me.
"the pain which you give me is now counting on you" ..... jeez. This whole poem makes me think of a poet, or artist, or musician, who has been betrayed by a woman he loved, but has gotten over her. BUT, she was his muse, so now maybe he's afraid he wont be able to write like he could when he was with her.
My other favlorite line is...
"no, now you cant hide as this one is just for you" it just has a good rhythm to it and a sort of ominous impliction. Great poem man. keep it up