Falling leaf
A Poem by Bhavya Kaushik
haiku
Falling leaf
With autumn colours
I’m falling from this dead tree
To live once again
© 2009 Bhavya Kaushik
Author's Note
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Syllabus count: 5-7-5
I welcome all sorts of suggestions on it As such I guess the ending is nice! But starting line isnt going well with it
Whats your take? :D
(Special thanks to Caffeine for her help :) )
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Dear Bhavya, This is a great haiku. I have read many haikus till date and this is one of the bests in them. I loved the last line the most which symbolizes that there is always a new beginning after an end, which is really very inspiring. Literally also it is just perfect with the syllabus count and presentation is outstanding like always. Great job Bhavya and I'm looking forward for you to write more beautiful haikus like this
Posted 16 Years Ago
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Added on September 5, 2008
Last Updated on January 8, 2009
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Bhavya KaushikIndia
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