LOST

for a contest!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

LOST

 

Without any destination,

Without any end,

I’m walking through this life.

 

With broken dreams,

With a bleeding heart,

With frozen tears…

 

I have been lost away!

 

Darkness consumes me,

And with every second,

I’m dying all over again… and again!

 

Without any thought,

Without a word,

Without my soul…

 

I have been lost away!

 

Betrayed by destiny,

Forgotten by the entire world,

I’m alone...all along!

 

Without any sound,

Without any aim,

And without you…

 

I have been lost away!

 

Lost not only from this world,

Not only from outside,

But…Lost within!

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Amanda]

what a heartfelt write...to be lost and without a meaningful place or aim, is a sad thing indeed. to lose oneself and the one you love.... leaving an empty place, not just in the heart but in the soul as well.

this write pulled at my heart and soul. i could feel the sadness, the emptiness, the aimless movements of a life truly lost.

well written as always, Bhavya....you captured it well.

Always,

Amanda

[Innocent]

This is great Bhavya, Though is it different from your usual style but is so strong and emotional. A very well versed poem.

[TamiViolet]

Pardon the indiscretion, but it definitely sucks to feel lost...indeed. I felt this in your work my friend, that overwhelming sense of detachment from life. I guess the worst aspect is the loneliness from within Bhavya. Darkness and death....incredibly bleak is the air when I read this verse. The title is certainly appropriate as well as the hunger for destiny to reach out once again and over - rule her initial decision...

Good luck in the contest my friend!
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