Lonely without you...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Lonely without you…

 

 

 

 

Watching this tear as it falls into lonely space,

And I wonder as it drops into life's nameless place.

 

Depression sets in and walks right in front of my sight,

As here I'm so lonely in darkness of this cold night.

 

With this much loneliness I'll never be the same again,

I may never say a word but you are not the one to blame.

 

It's a year and a half now but you are still on my every thought,

Every tear I held in falls, and now I can't seem to stop.

 

I feel so alone now that I even don't know what to do,

As I only wish... you would have taken me away with you...

 

 

Author's Note

I wrote this poem for a friend of mine who is no more now..She left this world about a year and a half back...as she was suffering from Leukemia !
I often miss her ....
:(


" I have tried so hard to tell myself that you are gone..But though! you are still with me...and I have been alone..all along..."

Reviews

[Imperfection]

Beautiful.
There is so much pain inside that is invisible to the world. Sometimes the tears fall to express the grief inside but can they ever wash away all the pain...?

My answer is no.

In fact, I see the intensity increasing with every new composition of yours.
The most beautiful poetry is that which flows out of a broken heart. Your work is proof of that.

Thank you for entering it into the Lonely Contest.

[Golden]

Short and powerful. Very beautiful piece of writing!
Thanks for posting it here.

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

This is just how I feel about my son, he's been gone over a year now, and the pain is still fresh as his birthday is in two days...A lovely tribute poem. Thank you for sharing, and my prayers to you. Debileah

[Amanda]

this is such a beautiful write and a loving tribute to your friend....it is often hard to let someone go, even though it couldn't be helped. just remember, that as long as you carry them in your heart, they are always with you.

Always,

Amanda

[Marina]

I love that.
The ending is great.

Great Job.Great write.

XxStaySweet,
Rinaaaaa