Lonely without you...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Lonely without you…

 

 

 

 

Watching this tear as it falls into lonely space,

And I wonder as it drops into life's nameless place.

 

Depression sets in and walks right in front of my sight,

As here I'm so lonely in darkness of this cold night.

 

With this much loneliness I'll never be the same again,

I may never say a word but you are not the one to blame.

 

It's a year and a half now but you are still on my every thought,

Every tear I held in falls, and now I can't seem to stop.

 

I feel so alone now that I even don't know what to do,

As I only wish... you would have taken me away with you...

 

 

Author's Note

I wrote this poem for a friend of mine who is no more now..She left this world about a year and a half back...as she was suffering from Leukemia !
I often miss her ....
:(


" I have tried so hard to tell myself that you are gone..But though! you are still with me...and I have been alone..all along..."

Reviews

[Imperfection]

Beautiful.
There is so much pain inside that is invisible to the world. Sometimes the tears fall to express the grief inside but can they ever wash away all the pain...?

My answer is no.

In fact, I see the intensity increasing with every new composition of yours.
The most beautiful poetry is that which flows out of a broken heart. Your work is proof of that.

Thank you for entering it into the Lonely Contest.

[CherryBomb]

"And I wonder as it drops into life's nameless place.".. my favorite line that I've heard. ever! amazing poem that can relate to any lonely day!

[Karl]

This is beautiful, simply beautiful.

[LlamaLord]

Ah, the hardship of losing a friend. Through pain and hurt, you manage to write about her. Such a powerful piece. Amazing as usual.

[MagiCrystal]

Pain and more pain.. such a deep poem and well done.. you have an soul of a poet... Amazing.. Magic

[Emily B]

Oh, this is beautiful. I'm sure she smiles at you often.

[Together]

oh! I'm very sorry for your friend but I'm sure wherever she is, she must be very proud of you. So don't feel sad.

[Kitty]

This is so sad and so powerful! The love for your friend shines through beautifully in this great piece of art!!!!

Nicely written!!!!

Josie

P.S Good luck in my contest :)

[MandarinOranges]

truely sad...
i must say that i am sorry for your loss. i know just how much it hurts to lose one that is close to you and you have done a spectaculiar job of expressing that here. good write!

[Dalaina Renee]

I am sorry to hear that! Toching poem! I had lost my grandma to colon cancer this last may. I know how hard it is to say good bye.

[Jason Henry]

such a beautiful piece for i'm sure a beautiful person...