You are still the one...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

YOU ARE STILL THE ONE…

 

 

You were the one that I've always wanted,

We started it so well but it soon was ended.

 

Your love gave me hope and a new life to live,

I committed a mistake of loving you which I can't forgive.

 

 

For you I died every second with this frozen heart,

As you went with someone else and left me apart.

 

 

We started it so well but it soon was ended,

But you are still the one that I've always wanted...

 

 

Author's Note

:'(
(I clicked the second pic from the video of that song "Apologize" lolz.. :D :D )

Reviews

[Angelic Darkness]

This is a sad poem of hurt, yet you still love. That is who we are,
we love, take chances, and we become strength of who we are.
Good write...AD

[Nassira]

Your poetry is very intense. I just enjoy the way you rhyme with your words. It is sad and the emotion seems to be coming out of all your pores. It is so real and sounds so true. Very sad and emotional poem indeed. Thank you for sharing Bhavya!

[Imperfection]

I like what you've done with the beginning and ending lines.
As usual, intense feelings in your words.

Overall, this is short and NOT-sweet.
Just what I was looking for.
Thanks for entering into the 'Less is More' Contest.