Recollect

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RECOLLECT

 

 

 

Recollect the past passage of time went in your life,

Everything which was good or bad but by you it was left behind.

Crave for an eternal loss and extreme longing,

Once open your eyes for the past and not for a new morning.

Loose yourself in your own opaque vision,

Loneliness if you remember had never ever given you an illusion.

Ever since your heart had heard of the words which were never spoken,

Create a distant place to keep a feel which was once forgotten.

Teach yourself to draw the demand that caused your soul to get rotten...

 

Author's Note

This writing is about recollecting past memories, somwhere faded in past life..
And I mean, while writing this I was getting different feelings and emotions and I think so, that's how this write came....!

Ahmm!! Give it a read..I know it's not too bad! lolz.. :D :D

Reviews

I was almost planning to correct a line or two, but when I reviewed it again, the emphasis was definitely put in place very well.

The message emphasized was also written well, it is a poem worth to be read several times, in each time, a new insight emerges.

Good form, good flow, good choice of words, well imparted message.

A very good piece

[Roxy]

Wow!!! I loved it

[Blackbeats]

True words of wisdom. Brilliant work

[!!..Love..!!]

Oh my god! This is so beautiful, your words are full of wisdom and I really loved them. This is one of my favorite now ^-^
Best of luck!

[Angelic Darkness]

Such passion and strength in your words of advice....AD

[Ruby Moon]

"Ever since your heart had heard of the words which were never spoken,"
lovely line...
*smiles*

a time that you recollect the past memories
and also a poem borned out of that...
i dont see how you can go wrong if you are writing what you feel