Recollect

Recollect

A Poem by Bhavya Kaushik
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RECOLLECT

 

 

 

Recollect the past passage of time went in your life,

Everything which was good or bad but by you it was left behind.

Crave for an eternal loss and extreme longing,

Once open your eyes for the past and not for a new morning.

Loose yourself in your own opaque vision,

Loneliness if you remember had never ever given you an illusion.

Ever since your heart had heard of the words which were never spoken,

Create a distant place to keep a feel which was once forgotten.

Teach yourself to draw the demand that caused your soul to get rotten...

 

© 2009 Bhavya Kaushik


Author's Note

Bhavya Kaushik
This writing is about recollecting past memories, somwhere faded in past life..
And I mean, while writing this I was getting different feelings and emotions and I think so, that's how this write came....!

Ahmm!! Give it a read..I know it's not too bad! lolz.. :D :D

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I was almost planning to correct a line or two, but when I reviewed it again, the emphasis was definitely put in place very well.

The message emphasized was also written well, it is a poem worth to be read several times, in each time, a new insight emerges.

Good form, good flow, good choice of words, well imparted message.

A very good piece

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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Wow! what a great way to write a poem

Posted 15 Years Ago


I liked the style a lot! Great man!

Posted 16 Years Ago


have read several of your poems...have enjoyed the way you have found images that fit with your writing

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I was almost planning to correct a line or two, but when I reviewed it again, the emphasis was definitely put in place very well.

The message emphasized was also written well, it is a poem worth to be read several times, in each time, a new insight emerges.

Good form, good flow, good choice of words, well imparted message.

A very good piece

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Great Acrostic!

jkb

Posted 16 Years Ago


This is good. I like layouts like your poem :)

It is a really touching poem.

Made me think of past times.

:)

Posted 16 Years Ago


It is very difficult to write an acrostic that rhymes so well as this one does.
You're a very talented person. Keep sending me read requests.

I know that you're open to suggestions. So I will take the liberty of saying something.... I think the opening line could be expressed better.

Other than that, good job.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The first picture in this is really mind blowing
"Teach yourself to draw the demand that caused your soul to get rotten..."
wow! what a beautiful way to end a much beautiful poetry like this.
You know often acrostics doesn't have a good flow, but this one is really flawless and I really appreciate it's flow the most.
There is a great wisdom in your writing. I loved it!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I agree, often we try so hard to figure out our future that we forget our own past, but remember "past is the key to future". I really loved this Acrostic

Posted 16 Years Ago


Dude! This is great. I felt the power in your words

Posted 16 Years Ago



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