I miss you mom!

 

 

 

 

  

 

 

 

 

 

 

I miss you mom…

 

I miss you mom, while walking alone in the rain,

I miss your tender touch mom.

But I know you'll never be back again.

 

 

I miss you mom, at every morning and at every night. 

I miss your lullaby and your bedtime stories. 

And now I'm searching just to get your one more sight.

 

 

 

I miss you mom, after returning from school to home, 

I miss your welcome and your smile. 

But now you're gone mom…so long.

 

 

  

I miss you mom, whenever I see my elder sister,  

Who is working so hard to get me well…  

Mom! See I'm even no longer your old prankster.

 

 

 

I miss you mom, so please come back soon. 

As here I want you to stay,

For twenty four hours a day 

I know this is really a hard time, 

And mom! I'm committing a crime, 

Of missing you so much tonight!

 

 

Author's Note

Ahmmm! I actually wrote this poem when I was either 13 or 14 :( :(


I was first confused while posting it here :(..So I asked my friends for their suggestions :)

So finally I came up with the decision that I'll keep it here :)

Reviews

[Carole]

Why would you remove it? Who says it doesn't meet WC standards? It is from your heart. That's what matters. Did your mom pass away or go some where? Motherhood is all of those things and more. No one sacrifices more-nurtures more-and cries more for her children or prays more, even when they are grown. :-) This would be perfect for Mother's day that is coming up!

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

LEAVE IT! This is a lovely write, don't remove it. Its wonderfully written, and heartfelt. A touching piece.

[Angelic Darkness]

I think this is a good poem for someone as young as a thirteen year
old to express himself. It's very sweet and innocent. Being true
to your feelings, even at that young of a age, is very rare, and tells
a lot about who you are as a person. The picture uploaded is beautiful
too.