I miss you mom!

 

 

 

 

  

 

 

 

 

 

 

I miss you mom…

 

I miss you mom, while walking alone in the rain,

I miss your tender touch mom.

But I know you'll never be back again.

 

 

I miss you mom, at every morning and at every night. 

I miss your lullaby and your bedtime stories. 

And now I'm searching just to get your one more sight.

 

 

 

I miss you mom, after returning from school to home, 

I miss your welcome and your smile. 

But now you're gone mom…so long.

 

 

  

I miss you mom, whenever I see my elder sister,  

Who is working so hard to get me well…  

Mom! See I'm even no longer your old prankster.

 

 

 

I miss you mom, so please come back soon. 

As here I want you to stay,

For twenty four hours a day 

I know this is really a hard time, 

And mom! I'm committing a crime, 

Of missing you so much tonight!

 

 

Author's Note

Ahmmm! I actually wrote this poem when I was either 13 or 14 :( :(


I was first confused while posting it here :(..So I asked my friends for their suggestions :)

So finally I came up with the decision that I'll keep it here :)

Reviews

[Carole]

Why would you remove it? Who says it doesn't meet WC standards? It is from your heart. That's what matters. Did your mom pass away or go some where? Motherhood is all of those things and more. No one sacrifices more-nurtures more-and cries more for her children or prays more, even when they are grown. :-) This would be perfect for Mother's day that is coming up!

[JENY]

Hi....
Bhavya...Read my poem INDIAN LULLABY...
Missing mom....
But...can you imagine a state....
where mothers begin to miss their babies....
even when they are so close.....to their n*****s...
Technology can render the maternal intimacy to that state....
In that state.....child wold not be aware that they are missing their moms...
Frigidity.....crawling into...live relationships...of life

[Sabine]

I wish I could describe how this touchs the heart. Your words are blessings to those who understand. Thx for putting your beautiful poem up. Sabine, Many Blessings

[Karl]

This is so beautiful, I'm sorry.

[Dalaina Renee]

Wow,you even had talent then! I had to hug my kids after I read this! I have been worried about my Mom, she had a heart attack last year. I have been taking care of her latley. I don't know what I'll do without her! Great poem. Thank you for sharing a part of your life here!

[Together]

I feel very strong after reading this poem of yours, I wanna give my mom a huge hug now!

[Kitty]

I'm glad you did, because this is such a beautiful dedication to your mother! This is a stunning poem. Losing a loved one is never easy. Writing about them is one of the best ways of keeping them with you forever!!

Great job!!!!

Josie

[deadlife]

This made me cry, love it. Sorry cannot write much. Bless you dear.

[RHEA CROSLEY]

I love this poem I think it is a true expression of the heart of a loving son to his mother. I like the way it flow. Good for you.

[Nicole (Carpe Diem)]

i put off reading this one because i had this feeling it would be a sad and emotional piece... i was right in my assumption.... beautiful piece Bhavya

[DarkAngelWriter]

Aww dude...