Let me LIVE..!!!

Let me LIVE..!!!

A Poem by Bhavya Kaushik
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A song lyric!

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LET ME LIVE...!!!

 

Why can't you let me live,

I'm tired of being so sophisticated.

Of being so complicated.

Don't you have any business except watching me?

Because I'm always finding you around,

And I just wanna be me.

Else I would make this sound!

(sound..d..d…d..d..)

 

[Verbal Acoustic]

 

And I just don't understand why,

You always wanna bring me down (down…down)

I just don't understand why,

You always bring me down!

(So put your hands up and...

Beat…beat…beat this ground)

 

 

I'm sick of being so secure,

And you still call me mature (huh!!)

I'm tired of being so bounded,

With morons I'm always surrounded!!!

 

Why can't you let me live,

I'm tired of being so sophisticated.

Of being so complicated.

Don't you have any business except watching me?

Because I'm always finding you around,

And I just wanna be me.

Else I would make this sound!

(sound..d..d…d..d..)

 

[Verbal Acoustic]

 

 

So why should I care for who you are,

I need not to walk in your shoes.

As I'll better hit you with this guitar,

 

I'm saying very respectfully,

To maintains a mile distance from me.

As it's the question of my dignity!!!

 

Why can't you let me live,

I'm tired of being so sophisticated.

Of being so complicated.

Don't you have any business except watching me?

Because I'm always finding you around,

And I just wanna be me.

Else I would make this sound!

(sound..d..d…d..d..)

 

[Verbal Acoustic]

 

And I just can't stop making this sound!!

 

[Verbal Acoustic continues]

 

(And you are still unaware,

You're fake and not real.

I'm getting into this all alone,

You're already gone...so long!)

 

So!! Just let me LIVE….!!!

Let me LIVE..!!!!

 

 

Why can't you let me live,

I'm tired of being so sophisticated.

Of being so complicated.

Don't you have any business except watching me?

Because I'm always finding you around,

And I just wanna be me.

Else I would make this sound!

(sound..d..d…d..d..)

 

[Verbal Acoustic fades...]

 

 

 

© 2009 Bhavya Kaushik


Author's Note

Bhavya Kaushik
This again is a song lyric! and it's actually kind of pop, kind of rock and kind of punk..(kind of everything huh!!)
Writing this one was really..really damn easy!!

But, Singing this one was really damn hard for me...and I remember during the first rehearsal of this song, my thought got chocked..
So, right now we are going with even a back up singer for this one..
lolz..! :D
let it come man!!

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Wow! This will make a great song.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Hey! This is brilliant, I know you dont give a damn to others!

Posted 16 Years Ago


It is like quite different from your other pieces of writing. I agree with Naula that you have a super talent of writing song lyrics. Please don't waste it.
God bless you!

Posted 16 Years Ago


You've got a gift with lyrics. Even with no music, I could imagine this being played and the acoustic noise where you wrote it in. The side notes with words in the back ground and the meaningful refrain, they all add up to one great song. Strong emotions guide you - you're a lyrical genious!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I Think so that you should write more songs like this!
I mean this is full of attitude and seems like you're shouting with every line "let me LIVE"
Great work !

Posted 16 Years Ago


I like both the quotes very much! and yeah the write ofcourse! great!

Posted 16 Years Ago


OK...live!

(I agree it should be very easy to write such a song, as you're not repressing your feelings...just penning what's inside.......indeed a good write...i love it............)

no one can ever let you live, we live by ourselves...they can only help you live.......(mindless heart scribbles)...ha!
lols.......thanks for sharing....

aaawwwww....one thing.....well it is related to all of your other poems and songs...the only thing different is, here, you're not asking the other person to let you live..rather [what i felt] you're annoying the person as if..mocking at them.......and i liked it the most! =]

Posted 16 Years Ago


Hey dude! This one is different, not like you other writes which conveys dark feel of pain and grief...
This is full of attitude..
Like I'm who I'm and don't give a damn to what people think of me huh!!
ha haha...Loved this one!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I agree such a wicked lyrics they are..
Looking forward to listen this one soon!

Posted 16 Years Ago


what a wicked song! it seems that it would be interesting to hear....i can relate with the lyrics.

it's a really nice song.

Amanda

Posted 16 Years Ago



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