Can you bring me back to LIFE ?

A song lyric by me and "love"

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

CAN YOU BRING ME BACK TO LIFE?

 

 

Yeah! If you could see into my eyes,

For the world you left behind.

If you could heal this heart,

And erase the pain just one more time.

 

I'll keep on asking you,

Can you bring me back to life?

 

I'm here without soul, without love and without voice,

But you're still moving me by telekinesis.

Thus I'm unable to make any other choice,

And on my body embedded some thousand iron pins.

 

So…you need to tell me now,

Can you bring me back to life?

 

I'm bleeding and fallen from heaven,

And all the angels, yes they are the eyewitness.

I can even hear the call of the red devil,

Since the distance between heaven and hell is so less.

 

Please…You need to tell me now,

Can you bring me back to life?

 

 

 

What can you do to bring me back?

(What can you do…?)

 

Can you bring me back to life?

(Can you….)

 

Sooner or later you need to meet me,

(What can you do to bring me back to life?)

 

So…call my name…

(As, you have no choice left… one day you're heart will melt…)

 

What can you do now?

(Except calling my name and my soul is full of shame…)

 

So…Bring me back…

Yes, bring me back to life…

 

[Guitar solo]

 

 

But you never ever called my name…

And I died wondering,

That one day…You will bring me back to life…

 

 

Author's Note

This is a song lyric which is composed by me and my friend "love"
this is her profile link--http://www.writerscafe.org/writers/noname/

And....we just sat together with our guitars and this song came out :)

And yeah...one more thing..This one has been inspired by that song "Bring me back to life" by Evanescence

Reviews

[!!..Love..!!]

AAhhhmmmm!! Now what to say about this write, Since it's also mine ^-^
First of all I would like to thank you for the amount of time that you spend with me while creating this song...
And you are a great guitarist I must say!
There is a true magic in your hands for both playing guitar and for writing lyrics like this.

I still remember last week when we sat together for the song and in an hour or so this one came out.

"I'm bleeding and fallen from heaven,
And all the angels, yes they are the eyewitness.
I can even hear the call of the red devil,
Since the distance between heaven and hell is so less."-These lines you already knew are my favorite and how much we both fought while writing these lines..
since they were not coming right at all...

But! lastly, we managed it and I simply loved working with you Bhavya!
An awesome singer, a damn impressive guitarist and an amazing writer.
Thanks again for your time and I'm looking forward to create more of songs like this with you!

!!..Love..!!

[forfila]

Nice guys,, I much enjoyed indeed,, cant wait to hear it..

[poddar kushal]

it is a cry from soul echoing through the street of words. I'm here without soul, without love and without voice,But you're still moving me by telekinesis.- you are becoming more matured as a poet sir.

[Candle in the wind]

Can you bring me back to life----only you can but but it cannot be thats the irony in life my friend isnt it?I would love to hear it sung!We keep repeating the question and then we repeat it like a zombie without any expectation and the day that expectation dies can we be comfortably numb.

[Fantasyfairy]

I would love to hear this put to music. The lyrics are so beautiful, I'm sure it would sound amazing. XX

[Ruby Moon]

haha...i amgla you didnt put "we just sat together with our guitars and this song [just] came out"
^-^
because i wont have believed that
i would really hope to listen this song with its guitar and all
so if you do decide to record it and put it up somewhere on the net...will you tell me?

[Imperfection]

I like the repitition of 'Can you bring me back to life?'

All your writings convey very strong emotions. That's true for this one as well.
Excellent composition.

[Kevin Andros]

You are writing quite a lot. And even though I'm absolutely and positively furious at you that you didn't send me a read request yet again in the third time running, I cannot help but admire the amount of work you both have put to it. You have enormous talent, and I believe you would make a successful writer.

This song makes me think of something. Nice work. Will say more in private. ~KA~