Can you bring me back to LIFE ?

A song lyric by me and "love"

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

CAN YOU BRING ME BACK TO LIFE?

 

 

Yeah! If you could see into my eyes,

For the world you left behind.

If you could heal this heart,

And erase the pain just one more time.

 

I'll keep on asking you,

Can you bring me back to life?

 

I'm here without soul, without love and without voice,

But you're still moving me by telekinesis.

Thus I'm unable to make any other choice,

And on my body embedded some thousand iron pins.

 

So…you need to tell me now,

Can you bring me back to life?

 

I'm bleeding and fallen from heaven,

And all the angels, yes they are the eyewitness.

I can even hear the call of the red devil,

Since the distance between heaven and hell is so less.

 

Please…You need to tell me now,

Can you bring me back to life?

 

 

 

What can you do to bring me back?

(What can you do…?)

 

Can you bring me back to life?

(Can you….)

 

Sooner or later you need to meet me,

(What can you do to bring me back to life?)

 

So…call my name…

(As, you have no choice left… one day you're heart will melt…)

 

What can you do now?

(Except calling my name and my soul is full of shame…)

 

So…Bring me back…

Yes, bring me back to life…

 

[Guitar solo]

 

 

But you never ever called my name…

And I died wondering,

That one day…You will bring me back to life…

 

 

Author's Note

This is a song lyric which is composed by me and my friend "love"
this is her profile link--http://www.writerscafe.org/writers/noname/

And....we just sat together with our guitars and this song came out :)

And yeah...one more thing..This one has been inspired by that song "Bring me back to life" by Evanescence

Reviews

[!!..Love..!!]

AAhhhmmmm!! Now what to say about this write, Since it's also mine ^-^
First of all I would like to thank you for the amount of time that you spend with me while creating this song...
And you are a great guitarist I must say!
There is a true magic in your hands for both playing guitar and for writing lyrics like this.

I still remember last week when we sat together for the song and in an hour or so this one came out.

"I'm bleeding and fallen from heaven,
And all the angels, yes they are the eyewitness.
I can even hear the call of the red devil,
Since the distance between heaven and hell is so less."-These lines you already knew are my favorite and how much we both fought while writing these lines..
since they were not coming right at all...

But! lastly, we managed it and I simply loved working with you Bhavya!
An awesome singer, a damn impressive guitarist and an amazing writer.
Thanks again for your time and I'm looking forward to create more of songs like this with you!

!!..Love..!!

[Karl]

Wow! It would make such a great song.

[Together]

Wow! I'm sure that it will make a very cool song!

[Angelic Darkness]

A love gone dark, and dead. Sometimes we don't need others to bring
us back, but have faith in our own souls to heal ourselves. I love the pictures
you added to this. AD

[Daisy]

I'm thinking this is so full of talent and shouldn't be here, should be on the radio for me to hear. so full of amazing words. really great.

[Judas Hammer]

Love the song. You are very talented. I like your work.

[deadlife]

A great write..song rather.
Wish to listen to it, though i felt like listening to this one while reading this...

[Amor-de-angel]

It would be so good for you to record it on a music player and add it to the piece with the music and you two singing it. I love the words.

[Blue Rose]

I love when writers writes something like this, while working together.
Great work guys!

[Innocent]

Brilliant work! and it felt as if like I'm falling from heaven to hell.
Its really brilliant!
superb.

[Blackbeats]

I knew you guys are extremely talented and see it resulted in the piece.
Amazing write friends.