Some thousand miles...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Some thousand miles…

 

I walked some thousand miles…

Just to turn back that time…

When sky turned black and heaven poured rain…

But these tears still never came…

And now I wonder…

Will I ever be back again?

 

Coz I walked some thousand miles…

Just to turn back that time…

When my world was just you…

Now our love gone away…

Even this sky turned blue…

And brightness came my way…

 

Since I walked some thousand miles…

Just to turn back that time…

When nightmares were best friends …

But now they can't pass me by….

There's no need of any fight…

Coz I don't need you tonight…

 

You should know that…

I walked some thousand miles…

Just to turn back that time….

 

Yeah…I walked some thousand miles…

And now…I even don't want to turn back that damn time…

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Even I don't know how this piece came from my mind..lolz :D :D

Feel free to review :)

Reviews

[!!..Love..!!]

This is also like any other of your work which is very beautifully written but the theme of this piece is very different from rest of your work...
This is somehow towards an optimistic side...
I agree with Ruby Moon on the line

"Yeah�I walked some thousand miles�

And now�I even don't want to turn back that damn time�"
Its really like as if you tried so hard to turn back that time and faced a lot of pain and sufferings which in the end proved pointless and of no use..
This is really a nice work....Seriously..
Good one man!

[Vaishali..^_^]

this is a true write..!

also i just love these line so pure and nice..!
Yeah�I walked some thousand miles�
And now�I even don't want to turn back that damn time�..

great..!^_^

[Karl]

Wow! I loved it.

[Golden]

Hey dude! This is awesome!

[Together]

This is great! I liked the ending section the most!

[ah]

this is amazing, GREAT write, thanx for sharing my friend keep it up

[Emily B]

wow! Absolutely stunning! Excellent write.

[Sr.phil]

doesnt it just happen alot, when you write something down and later look at it and question yourself "when did i write this? or even did i write this? this is way to good for me to have written it" nice job bro..phil

[None]

Your incredible talent shines through your emotional writing and makes this a poem of feelings. I'm sure you have gone through plenty of shoes with all that walking! Okay, that's not even cute. Every verse is special. I really enjoyed this...
"When nightmares were best friends �
But now they can't pass me by�
There's no need of any fight�
Coz I don't need you tonight�"
....Your words are full of strong feelings and the combination is a fantastic poem!

[Blue Rose]

Even this write looks like a song lyric to me.or may be it's because of your writing style.
But whatever it is, I liked the piece a lot.
A worth read.

It was a realization through the journey that provided insight to why whatever happened was for the best. This was an enjoyable read, and insightful at the same time.