I DIED inside tonight..

Life has no rewinds and forwards, It unfolds itself at its own pace. So never miss a chance to live it..or else you may die inside :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I DIED INSIDE TONIGHT..

 

I thought of crying tonight…

But I can't…As…

You may know that weakness inside…

Since tears never came from these eyes…

 

I thought of smiling tonight…

But I can't…As…

I'm sick from this fakeness of mine…

With every second my heart's dying…

 

I thought of breathing tonight…

But I can't…As…

I'm surrounded with this unreal air….

Relief is something which I can't find…

 

I thought of loving someone else tonight…

But I can't…As…

My heart is still not with me…

And I know where it can be…

 

I thought of living my life tonight…

But I can't…As…

My soul is still living for you…

Which yours never cared to do…

 

I can't cry…

I can't smile…

I can't breathe…

I can't love…

I can't even Live…

So…I silently closed these eyes…

And…Yes…Finally….

 

I died inside tonight...

I died inside tonight....

 

 

 

Author's Note

aaaahmmmm!!! Just a collection of few random thoughts! :)

Reviews

[!!..Love..!!]

I found the piece very Deep and real describing your futile search for some love, life, smile and tears but unfortunately when you found yourself so alone you better decided to die, as it better to die than to live a disgusting life like this! I also found that the piece is somehow full of rage and anger. But the literal and lyrical flow of the piece is really tremendous and thus making it such a powerful write. Beautiful indeed!

!!!...Love...!!!

[Vaishali..^_^]

it's really very awesome ....!
it just makes me feels that pain..!
it's so deep and dark..!
great^_^

[Karl]

"I died inside tonight " - wow! what a beautiful line.

[Together]

This is a worst thing to happen, when someone dies...inside!

This is very good. I liked the structure and the flow. It was such a powerful piece of writing! I could sense the anger and almost despair that your words brought to life. Very good!

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

A beautifully written poem. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[forfila]

This is an awesome poem, I love it. The picture is something special too with some more great lines written across that =)

Very nicely done indeed =)

Love
Me

[ah]

very beautifully written, thanx for the share, keep it up

[Golden]

I can't cry�

I can't smile�

I can't breathe�

I can't love�

I can't even Live�

So�I silently closed these eyes�

And�Yes�Finally�.



I died inside tonight...

I died inside tonight....




I liked the way you played with the colors throughout the write, it actually created a new and sad environment for the write, which is very impressive.

[Blue Rose]

It's kind of much as a rock song.
"i died inside tonight..
I DIED inside tonight.."
Very well written and the pic actually pumped me.

[Blackbeats]

Very emotional and deep.
True feel!