I'm LOST....!!!

 

 

 

 

 

 I'm LOST..!!

 

 

 

 

I’m searching for a reason for smiling once again…

As this life for me is a second name of pain…

I’m lost somewhere in this lonely night…

And even can’t find any guiding light…

I’m searching for help but can’t find…

Or may be I’m just out of my mind…

So someone please come and let me go…

As… no one likes to walk alone…

It hurts to walk alone every night,

Without any hope or light…

I know one day my time will come…

So right now I need to stay numb…

And now I came too far…

That I can’t even turn myself back…

But I’m sure of one thing...

That...I’m lost…

And no one’s even trying to find me…

Coz… I’m lost…

I'm lost....

 

 

 

Reviews

[Ruby Moon]

lost in the very sense of the word...
lost from view, lost from people's mind and heart
lost is when no one remembers you
^-^
at least thats what i think you are trying to say with this piece
your works are great but can bring me down as it is so real...

[poddar kushal]

I know one day my time will come�

So right now I need to stay numb�

these are great lines by any means.

[Jazlean]

I love this, mainly coz this is how I have felt way too many times. I feel these words.
with some tweaks, this would make an awesome song, I was actually singing this as I read it.

on a different note, I am not a big fan of the underline and giant red font...but awkward to read.

anyway great work, I feel the the emotion in these words, however the overall structure could be I dunno worked on, that doesn't really matter to much as peoms can be just about expression.
well done.
~Jazlean