I'm LOST....!!!

 

 

 

 

 

 I'm LOST..!!

 

 

 

 

I’m searching for a reason for smiling once again…

As this life for me is a second name of pain…

I’m lost somewhere in this lonely night…

And even can’t find any guiding light…

I’m searching for help but can’t find…

Or may be I’m just out of my mind…

So someone please come and let me go…

As… no one likes to walk alone…

It hurts to walk alone every night,

Without any hope or light…

I know one day my time will come…

So right now I need to stay numb…

And now I came too far…

That I can’t even turn myself back…

But I’m sure of one thing...

That...I’m lost…

And no one’s even trying to find me…

Coz… I’m lost…

I'm lost....

 

 

 

Reviews

[Ruby Moon]

lost in the very sense of the word...
lost from view, lost from people's mind and heart
lost is when no one remembers you
^-^
at least thats what i think you are trying to say with this piece
your works are great but can bring me down as it is so real...

[RaindropsRoses93]

Since I have a poem with the same name I thought I would read and see how different they are. This piece was a beautiful read, and i also loved the rhyme pattern you used for the flow. Great piece, keep writing!

[Fantasyfairy]

Sad and lonely words. Dark and beautiful too. XX

[Vivica Heart]

Ooh, another emotion filled poem.
It's quite amazing, really.
How you portray the emotions, I mean.
I love the imagery and such that comes from your words.
Your poetry is kind of inspiring me right now....
:]

[Nicole (Carpe Diem)]

i think this is a great piece... i can relate...
nicely done

[ah]

very great way of expressing confusion and loneliness.... thanx for posting, keep writing

[Maria Fischinger]

Its better to walk alone than to be with bad company, it is a spanish saying, but it is not fun to be alone.

[mattavelli]

This is great!!
All alone, watching the world go by hu?
Don't go numb. That leads to not caring. You should go crazt and let the world watch you. :)
Happy Valentines Day!!
Have fun. :)

[!!..Love..!!]

This is also a great piece. I mean its so real and true. It's not like as if it can't happen with anyone.
this is a very practical and mature piece!

[Kevin Andros]

It is so right that no one likes to walk alone..... let alone walk alone in the darkness of a moonless night! Yet you have to walk alone a counless number of times in your life whether you like it or not! You just have to walk alone where there are no guiding light at all and keep walking like a sleepless eremite.

Great pecie of work indeed! But I don't understand why would you even want to go back! ~KA~