I'm LOST....!!!

 

 

 

 

 

 I'm LOST..!!

 

 

 

 

I’m searching for a reason for smiling once again…

As this life for me is a second name of pain…

I’m lost somewhere in this lonely night…

And even can’t find any guiding light…

I’m searching for help but can’t find…

Or may be I’m just out of my mind…

So someone please come and let me go…

As… no one likes to walk alone…

It hurts to walk alone every night,

Without any hope or light…

I know one day my time will come…

So right now I need to stay numb…

And now I came too far…

That I can’t even turn myself back…

But I’m sure of one thing...

That...I’m lost…

And no one’s even trying to find me…

Coz… I’m lost…

I'm lost....

 

 

 

Reviews

[Ruby Moon]

lost in the very sense of the word...
lost from view, lost from people's mind and heart
lost is when no one remembers you
^-^
at least thats what i think you are trying to say with this piece
your works are great but can bring me down as it is so real...

[Vaishali..^_^]

it's so beautiful...and sad..!
i love it..

!But I'm sure of one thing...
That...I'm lost�
And no one's even trying to find me�
Coz� I'm lost�
I'm lost....

awesome..!^_^

[Karl]

I'm familiar with this feeling.
Great write.

[Imperfection]

Great write overall. I'm absolutely in love with the ending.
You know when you're lost when no one's trying to find you.

The loneliness in you stands out very strongly in each one of your writings.
This one again carries pretty intense feelings.

And yes, the pictures. I'm never tired of praising them. Great choice of pictures. I have told you before that your pictures add life to your poems. I will now say that your poems, no matter how depressing and gloomy they may seem to some (I love them!!) add life to this site.

Well done, Bhavya.

[Together]

Lost within, isnt so?

[Rosary]

Its good but the flow is a little off

[Christopher 'Windstorm'..]

nicely done!

[Roxy]

Ah! I love these kinds of writes..
Like walking lonely under the moonlight without any destination..
kind of lost...kind of broken! I loved it

[Golden]

But I'm sure of one thing...

That...I'm lost�

And no one's even trying to find me�"


What more to say...this is such a beautiful write.
Lovely.

[Blue Rose]

"I know one day my time will come�

So right now I need to stay numb�

And now I came too far�

That I can't even turn myself back�

But I'm sure of one thing...

That...I'm lost�"

It's right that no one likes to walk alone.
Beautiful write!

[Innocent]

I agree with other writers.
This is one of those pieces with which everyone could relate themselves and so do I
Since often I feel the same, Quite sad but true.