I promise to be there for YOU..

 

 

 

I promise to be there for you

 

Every time I breathe I only wanna feel you…

Nothing on this world can change my love for you…

And I promise to be there for you….

Always be there with you…

Yes I do…I do…

Whenever you’re apart…

I just thought of crushing my heart…

And whenever you turn back your side…

The distance seems some thousand miles wide…

You’re the one who can listen to my unspoken words…

Which no one on this planet had ever heard…

And the time we spend apart makes our love go stronger…

But its something with which I can’t go much longer…

I can even hear your voice when you’re gone…

And can even see you from far there beyond…

I just wanna live in you, don’t ask how…

Because you’re just living in me now…

And…every time I breathe I only wanna feel you…

Nothing on this world can change my love for you…

And I promise to be there for you….

Yes I do….Yes I do….

 

 

Reviews

[Imperfection]

I can even hear your voice when you're gone�

And can even see you from far there beyond�

This feeling is all too familiar to me. Sometimes, I just want to shut my ears but I don't for I know that even then I will hear that voice.

I just wanna live in you, don't ask how�

Because you're just living in me now�

This line has wounded me. But it's my favorite one too. Painful.

[Lia]

Beautiful piece. "I just wanna live in you, don't ask how� Because you're just living in me now�" A feeling so hard to describe. A great poem. Thank you xx

[ah]

beautiful and heartfelt my friend, amazing love poem, i enjoyed it a lot thanx for posting, keep writing

[!!..Love..!!]

This is such a heart melting piece,making a promise of life.And the words you've used are brilliant.An honest and true piece!

[poddar kushal]

honest words were always your speciality.

[Kevin Andros]

Wah Taj! A great work and I couldn't help making the comment. This is Bhavya Kaushik At his best! Krushing heart and tears. Though you never seem to cheer of, I think you do best what you do. being sad. :-). Anyway, It's kind of accurate, but at the same time, a bit far fetched. Continue like this and you will rise a lot! Keep writing! ~KA~