I promise to be there for YOU..

I promise to be there for YOU..

A Poem by Bhavya Kaushik

 

 

 

I promise to be there for you

 

Every time I breathe I only wanna feel you…

Nothing on this world can change my love for you…

And I promise to be there for you….

Always be there with you…

Yes I do…I do…

Whenever you’re apart…

I just thought of crushing my heart…

And whenever you turn back your side…

The distance seems some thousand miles wide…

You’re the one who can listen to my unspoken words…

Which no one on this planet had ever heard…

And the time we spend apart makes our love go stronger…

But its something with which I can’t go much longer…

I can even hear your voice when you’re gone…

And can even see you from far there beyond…

I just wanna live in you, don’t ask how…

Because you’re just living in me now…

And…every time I breathe I only wanna feel you…

Nothing on this world can change my love for you…

And I promise to be there for you….

Yes I do….Yes I do….

 

 

© 2009 Bhavya Kaushik


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I can even hear your voice when you're gone�

And can even see you from far there beyond�

This feeling is all too familiar to me. Sometimes, I just want to shut my ears but I don't for I know that even then I will hear that voice.

I just wanna live in you, don't ask how�

Because you're just living in me now�

This line has wounded me. But it's my favorite one too. Painful.



Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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i'm in l0v with yer w0rdz

Posted 13 Years Ago


so beautiful.. emotional and romantic...!
^_^

Posted 15 Years Ago


So beautiful and romantic

Posted 15 Years Ago


hey! This is nice, very much romantic.

Posted 16 Years Ago


This is simply lovely. It reminds me of a love that lingers far into the future. One that transcends the reality of who you are with presently. A love so strong that it remains even when the person is no longer in your life. Tragically sad...one I have felt.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Quite romantic and beautiful.
I loved this one ^_^

Posted 16 Years Ago


Its a very bright write with optimistic and romantic feel.
Great work.

Posted 16 Years Ago


And I promise to be there for you�.

Yes I do�.Yes I do�.

Ahmm! Lovely flow and both the pics are really very nice.
Moved me

Posted 16 Years Ago


Short and meaningful.
I always like writes like this.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Ahm!! This one is romantic huh!!
And full of joy and love and care and romance.
It actually reminded me of someone.
Good write!

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on February 9, 2008
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