I CRY..!!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I CRY...

 

 

I lonely pray to be blessed,

To live my life without any mess,

But here my world’s without any rest,

Seems like I’m living in a hell,

Where answers are so far…

And…I cry…I cry silently….

I cry inside of me…

I cry so honestly…

I cry without any drop of tear…

I cry with such a great fear…

I cry not for that goodbye…

But I cry for those tears of yours…

That dropped into my hand…

When you said you won’t be back again….

And still I found myself living with those memories….

As…I cry…I still cry silently...

I cry inside of me…

I cry so honestly…

I cry without any drop of tear…

I cry with such a great fear…

And…I’m still crying...

Because…

You’re not here with me... :(

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Emily B]

Your words are honest. True. You can never fault a writer for that.

In my opinion, the first few lines are not as high up the mountain as the words that follow. Maybe you could trade

"I lonely pray to be blessed,

To live my life without any mess,

But here my world's without any rest,

Seems like I'm living in a hell,

Where answers are so far�"

for

I whisper a lonely prayer for blessing. . .

Lovely words. Thanks for letting me read it.

[ah]

such a powerful sad writing, great write, i enjoyed it greatly, keep writing, thanx for posting

[Lia]

You get your feelings across really well. Thanks xx

[Daisy]

a revelation of a true person admitting his emotions to the full. thats what I read from this and thank you for writing this. so many never let there feelings out and so many are never at one with life. hope in writing this you felt the same as when I read this.

[poddar kushal]

the words came even closer to your heart than the whole poem allowed them to be . very nice writting. i thing it is one of your best.

[Jena]

very beautiful

[PjsOK]

Your poem pours out honesty and true feeling.

[munch]

I cry not for that goodbye�

But I cry for those tears of yours�

That dropped into my hand�


these are the best lines
coz v never cried bcoz of my pain but bcoz of pain he had faced

[Kevin Andros]

As usual, a great composition mate! Awsome work indeed! But I would seriously saying that your favorate hobby (crying) is getting on to me a bit now! All your works are related to crying! I say give it a rest man!

Now speaking of your work, is just awsome, great lines, great composition! I particularly loved these lines:

I lonely pray to be blessed,

To live my life without any mess,

But here my world’s without any rest,

Seems like I’m living in a hell,

Where answers are so far…

And…I cry…I cry silently….

I cry inside of me…

I cry so honestly…

Awsome work mate! Keep this work up! Just stop crying! Aur Kitna royega!? ~KA~