I CRY..!!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I CRY...

 

 

I lonely pray to be blessed,

To live my life without any mess,

But here my world’s without any rest,

Seems like I’m living in a hell,

Where answers are so far…

And…I cry…I cry silently….

I cry inside of me…

I cry so honestly…

I cry without any drop of tear…

I cry with such a great fear…

I cry not for that goodbye…

But I cry for those tears of yours…

That dropped into my hand…

When you said you won’t be back again….

And still I found myself living with those memories….

As…I cry…I still cry silently...

I cry inside of me…

I cry so honestly…

I cry without any drop of tear…

I cry with such a great fear…

And…I’m still crying...

Because…

You’re not here with me... :(

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Emily B]

Your words are honest. True. You can never fault a writer for that.

In my opinion, the first few lines are not as high up the mountain as the words that follow. Maybe you could trade

"I lonely pray to be blessed,

To live my life without any mess,

But here my world's without any rest,

Seems like I'm living in a hell,

Where answers are so far�"

for

I whisper a lonely prayer for blessing. . .

Lovely words. Thanks for letting me read it.

[Vaishali..^_^]

ah..!it's so sad and so dark

I cry without any drop of tear�
I cry with such a great fear�
I cry not for that goodbye�
But I cry for those tears of yours�
That dropped into my hand�

very honest and true..!and so powerful ^_^

[Karl]

This is really so genuine and true.

[!!..Love..!!]

oh! dude....This is beautiful!

[Together]

This is really very genuine and honest, I loved it!

[Roxy]

I liked the flow of this write.
"I cry..inside of me."
Brilliant write.

[Golden]

I cry without any drop of tear�

I cry with such a great fear�

I liked these lines a lot and the pic is also getting well with the write.

[Blue Rose]

Oh!! Beautifully sad :(
sad and dark

[Blackbeats]

Very genuine and deep.
I think so that the above quote literally binds up everything.
Great

[Innocent]

This is really a very genuine feel of an individual which should not be confused with weakness as the first pic says. Each and every word is really very honest and came right up from your heart and thus made the entire write so real and beautiful.

[Carrie Montgomery]

"I cry not for that goodbye�

But I cry for those tears of yours�

That dropped into my hand�

When you said you won't be back again"
wonderful lines. this is sad, vulnerable, and full of raw emotion.
"just becuase I cry doesn't mean I am weak" I couldn't agree more I think it takes a very strong person to feel secure enough to show real emotion.