Missing you HURTS!!

I don't miss ya...I miss the person I though you were...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

MISSING YOU HURTS!!

( If even a day should go by when I don’t say "I Miss you"…may never a moment go by without you knowing that I do…)

 

When there was so much to say, and silence said it all…

And now I realize that life without you…

Is not fine at all…

My heart is disarray…

My mind is reeling with distraction…

My body feels for yours…

An irresistible attraction…

Each moment, every bit of mine…

Keep saying that…

Today isn’t really a big occasion…

And there is no particular reason to write but…

Without you, there is no music in my life…

No sunshine in my life, no joy in my soul…

Although we remain apart, it’s nice to know we are together in thoughts…

It seems you are always in my dreams…

You fill my walking hours…

Your presence and your promises…

Warm me with their magic powers…

Whenever we’re apart…

That sense of emptiness starts growing…

But when you’re close to me…

My world is filled to overflowing…

Iam lonesome without you….

As each and every moment…

Add your warm sunshine to my life…

By your charming presence once again….

Come back soon, for…Iam missing you…

Sometimes, when Iam alone…

I close my eyes and think of you…

And the thought of your love warms me inside and makes me smile…

And whenever we’ll meet….I’ll take you there…

Someday, somehow, somewhere….

I Miss you…I Miss you…I Miss you…

Oh!

And it hurts…

Missing you hurts…

 

 

Reviews

[Anshul Khandelwal]

Well said.. in a simple manner... but the depth of it makes me realizes how much it hurts to miss someone... But
it is those moments that make your love grow deeper and longer... Those fond memories of hers will never let you diverge... Keep up the good work and dun miss her so much :) I knw it hurts.

Excellent Write ..

[Nithin.R.S]

more than inspiration..its depiction of your feelings..at some places you missed somewords i guess..
missing someone indicates how much affection is there for that person...conveying it through words can
ease out the pain ..may be it can showcase the situation of one to that person effectively..than by any other possible means...so keep writing..with that zest..nice one...

[Imperfection]

So full of longing and pain.

I think all of us will be able to relate to this.

Very sad and beautiful.

[Kevin Andros]

:o

Very touching peice indeed! I Can say that you have a un-real talent indeed! The way you write your peices, It is just awsome! You almost bring tears in my eyes by your composition. But I don't know why you always want to make your readers cry. Or perhaps I do know. :P

Anyway, a great peice to write and a great idea to bring forward! Keep up the great work! ~KA~